mój sen-dość oryginalny ale realy-prosze o spr.!!

I had a horrible dream last nigcht. As a matter of fact I had 3 dreams. One worse than second. At the beginning of my first dream I flew to England and I sit in the plain next to the window. Suddenly I saw that one engine had exploded and the plain started shake. Fortunately we landed luckyly and I was very happy because on the airport was waiting my husband. We got off from the plain and went to the passport control. There were two men in uniforms. They looked as soldiers and they had some skanner. They checked that thumb's picture on the Identity Card is realy, so first they skaned photo from the ID and second thumb the same person. If skanner gave high signal- everything was well, if skanner gave low signal- soldiers coudn't let sombody in theyr country. While they was skanning my ID and then my thumb I heard low signal of skanner. They did the skanning three times but for nothing. They told me that my ID is forged and they have to deport me to Poland. I was very crying that I won't see my husband.
Third dream was about my handbag. Someone stole my handbag on the airport. In my bag were money, perfumes and tishue. It was stupid dream.
Second dream was the worst. My husband and I walked one the street in London and suddenly we met two policemen. They wanted to check our Identity Cards but I hadn't it becaus I lost my ID. They took us to the Police and they told me that these things are punish by death penalthy. I told them that I don't wont die ealier than my husband. One of them told me that he will order two soldiers to shoot us. One will shoot at me and the second at my husband and this way we will die in the same time. I agreed and we came into the room, where criminals as we were sent before a firing squad. My husband hold me on his hand and we stood next to the wall. Suddenly I heard a shoot and I saw a red hole in my stomach. They didn't shoot in the same time. And this moment I woke up. It was 3 a.m. and I coudn't fall asleep again. It was horrible. For long time I didn't sleep so bad.

Prawda że dziwne rzeczy mi się snia?? inne sny to "księzyce amerykańskie" wilekości naszych Rys.
Czekam na odpowiedz - pomozcie :)))))

Prosze jeszcze raz przypomniec sobie uzycia articles 'a', 'an, ' i 'the'. To jest najwazniejsze, bez tego zdania nie sa poprawne.

'One worse than second' (jabym to inaczej napisala - each one worse than the previous one).
At the beginning of my first dream I flew to England and I 'sit' SAT in the 'plain' (nie to plain - plane-samolot) next to the window. Suddenly I
saw that one engine had exploded and the plaNE started TO shake.
Fortunately, we landed 'luckyly' (ortog- zle slowo - lepiej SAFELY) and I was very happy because 'on' AT the airport 'was waiting my husband' (zla kol slow ...my husband was waiting-mozna dodac FOR ME). We got off from the plaNE and went to the passport control.
They looked 'as' LIKE soldiers and they had 'some' (nie, tutaj A) sCanner. They checked that THE thumb's 'picture' (nie, tutaj slowo IMPRINT) on the Identity Card is 'realy' (zle slowo - tutaj REAL-prawdziwy), so first they sCanNed THE photo from the ID and second THE thumb OF the same person. If THE sCanner gave A high PITCHED signal- everything was well, if THE sCanner gave A low signal- THEN THE soldiers coudn't let 'somEbody' (ja wolalabym slowa THAT SOMEONE) inTO 'theyr' THEIR country. While 'they was' (prosze o przypomnienie tego..I was, you were, she was, we were, you were, they were) sCanning my ID and then my thumb I heard THE low signal of THE sCanner. They did the sCanning three times, but ALL for nothing. They told me that my ID is forged and they have to
deport me BACK to Poland. I was 'very crying' (nie - niema czegos takiego..to co napisalas to ..ja bylam bardzo plakalam..lepiej ..I cried very much) that I won't see my husband.
THE third dream was about my handbag. Someone stole my handbag 'on' AT the
airport. In my bag were money, perfumes and 'tishue' TISSUES. It was A stupid
dream.
THE second dream was the worst. My husband and I 'walked' WERE WALKING DOWN one 'the' (niepotr) street in London and suddenly we met two policemen. They wanted to check our Identity Cards, (przecinek) but I 'hadn't it' (nie, nie tak - DID NOT HAVE IT WITH ME) becausE I HAD lost my ID. They took us to
the Police STATION and they told me that these things are punishABLE by THE death penaltY. I told them that I 'don't' (prosze nie uzywac tego 'don't' w ten sposob, cos to wkracza do uzycia, ale tutaj jest niepopr- DID NOT wAnt TO die eaRlier than my husband.
One of them told me that he 'will' WOULD order two soldiers to shoot us. One
will shoot at me and the second at my husband and this way we will die
'in' AT the same time. I agreed and we came into the room, where criminals SUCH AS US, 'as we' (niepotr) were sent before a firing squad. My husband hEld 'me on' (niepotr) 'his' (tutaj MY) hand and we stood next to the wall. Suddenly I heard a shOT and I saw a red hole in my stomach. They 'didn't' HAD NOT shOT 'in' AT the same time. And AT this moment I woke up. It was 3 a.m. and I couLdn't fall asleep again.
For A long time I 'didn't' (tutaj jest ciekawie - napisz to zdanie po polsku) sleep so badLY.
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