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Nowedays it is wery famous amoung studenrs taking a year out between school and higer education. It has good and bad sides.

frist of all one of adventages taking a year out between school and higer educationis that young people can in this time vist a lot of interesting pleaces on the world. They can develop konwledge about other countries, see how look like live people on the other pleaces on the world and how different is thier culture from our. Secondly it is the best way for earn some money and achieve new experience, feel freedom and ee how look life wihout parents control. What is more this is good solution for this people who want improve level of proficiency in english or learn other languages.

On the other hand taking a year out beteen school and higer education is not always good solution becouse education is very important and young people can forget a lot of information. Moreover young people are unexperirnced, inprudent and there is a danger that they get into trouble for example they can be mugging or rob by someone. What is mare they could be such fascinate by traveling on the world that they cant come back to hame and school where they have to learn a lot and work hardly.

To sum up taking a year out beteen school and higer education is wery good idea because in this way young people can visit a lot of pleaces on the world, learn foregin languages and achieve new experients.

>frist of all one of adventages taking a year out between school and
>higer educationis that young people can in this time vist a lot of
>interesting pleaces on the world.

is that young people can use this time to visit...in the world.

Popraw tez literówki, mnie sie nie chce.


see how look like live people on the other pleaces on
>the world and how different is thier culture from our.

see how people live in other places in the world.....from ours.

Pełno literówek tutaj też jest.

Secondly it is
>the best way for earn some money and achieve new experience, feel
>freedom and ee how look life wihout parents control.

Tu też pełno literówek.
....way to earn....and gain new experience....see how life is without parental control.

What is more this
>is good solution for this people who want improve level of
>proficiency in english or learn other languages.
...is a good solution for people who want to improve their level...

plus oczywiście literówki

is not always good solution
...a good solution

literówki w co drugim prawie wyrazie. Pisz wolniej albo sprawdzaj to co piszesz.


inprudent - jest takie słowo?

for example they can be mugging or rob by someone.

...they can be mugged or robbed

What is
>mare they could be such fascinate by traveling on the world that they
>cant come back to hame and school where they have to learn a lot and
>work hardly.
they can become so fascinated...in the world.....back home

is wery
>good idea because in this way young people can visit a lot of pleaces
>on the world, learn foregin languages and achieve new experients.
is a very good idea.....in the world....and gain...

Literówki!!!! Wszędzie.

Nowadays it is very famous among students to take a year off between school and higher education. In my opinion there are good as well as bad sides of this idea.

First of all, one of the advantage of taking a year off between school and
university is that they can visit a lot of interesting places around the world. Moreover, they can develop knowledge about other countries, see how look life of the people from different places and how their culture from ours. Secondly, it is also the best way to earn some money, get new experience, to feel freedom and see how is it to live without parents control. What is more, it is a great solution for those who want to improve their English or learnt other languages.

On the other hand, taking a year off school is not always a good idea because higher education is very important and young people during this gap can forget a lot of important information. Moreover, teenagers are often inexperienced and thoughtless, thus exist a little danger that they can get into some troubles, for example: they can be robbed or mugged by someone. What is more, they can get so fascinated about travelling around the world that they may even stay abroad and never come back to school and home.

To sum up, taking a year off school and higher education is very good idea because in this way young people can visit a lot of places around the world, learn foreign languages and gain new experiences.

Moreover, they can develop knowledge about other countries,
>see how look life of the people from different places and how their culture
>differentiate from ours.


zgubilam - differentiate w tym zdaniu.

how our culture differs from ours.

A w 1. zdaniu zamiast "famous" powinno być "popular".

their culture oczywiście, nie our culture.

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