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My favourite website is http://www.canon.com/c-park/. Why? Because I am person, who pleasant to create something from nothing. I like to produce by hand - made jewelry, I'm interested in decoupage, and one time I had even occasion to assemble piece of furnitures what gave me many gladdens. I found this site searching information about my camera. I like it immediately, because I found there free materials to create a lot of things for science, fun or gifts.
This website is very colored and fun. Major divisions sites are „Greetings”, „3D Paper Craft”, „Scrapbook”, „Art Craft”, „Calendars” and „Digital Photo Gallery”.
In sector „Greetings” are cards, stationery and envelopes. There are cards for many holidays and occasions esspecialy Birthday, Christmas, Easter, Mother's and Father's day. If you aren't quite satisfied with regular cards you should make a special one of craft and pop-up card, which have a lot of parts and are very impression.
“Paper craft” is something in type of our Polish cut-out but you mast also build a thing of it. This site presenting every kind of papercraft you could imagine - from simple toys to intricate crafts. There's something for all the family. You can create cute animals with paper crafts or build your own town and add new vehicles and buildings. You can create lucky items, which are great as decorations and may even bring you good luck. There are also 3D paper craft. You can create a 3D "Globe Puzzle" by combining the twelve identically-shaped pieces. I think that the most amazing thing on this site is Science Museum on which you can find three sectors with paper craft, Insect, Universe, Dinosaurs.
Next sector is “Scrapbook” which allow me to create albums that I can decorate with photos and text. I can keep my memories forever by storing them in a scrapbook. That can be also a beautifull gift for someone special.
The section which I recomenden is “Calendars”. There are huge range of calendars. I can choose the calendars with fun shape or foto frame calendars. There are also CD-sized calendars and you can use a CD case as a frame.
There are still many things which I didn't describe, because this side is so extended. I think, that this website gives us possibility of developmental entertainment for whole family. I am very happy that I descover it.

Z góry dziekuję!

Hej ludzie! Zlitujcie się! Muszę to mieć na piątek a czas ucieka. Mój kumpel też ma problem. To jego praca:


I will begin writing something about me. My adventure with computers have been stared when I was 6. Then my Dad had took me to place where he's work at this time. Then I started to dicover some part of computer. Offcourse at this time I was interested in computer games and word processor. Then this was for me only fun and the first stage of my fascination computers.When I was 17 my parents bought computer and after about 8 months my father bought modem. It was my first meeting with global network. I went through my interests and joined community which know well computers and tweaks and overclocks it. I read a lot and start to help other people with their computer problems. All of this people were organised in vortal and forum placed on website adddress: www.tweak.pl and www.forum.tweak.pl. Most often I visited alone forum. After six or seven years I am the advanced user of computer and advise myself with many problems. Thanks to that assisted and still help many people when knits something with their outfit. Two years ago my favourite website has down. On fast time regenerated as vortal www.purepc.pl. More important is that survived the data base and kept all old topics. Now, this huge data base helps thousands people, madcaps and that people who do not interest excessively informatics. When I search any information about computer periphicals I go there. You can find there any information you have been searched. For instans you want to buy a new compter. Want to find the best elements for you desktop PC. This site permits me to bring to the fore my information about computers. Site is very readable, because most important information are shared on divisions. This forum this my long-standing passion, will be with me to the end of my life and have arguments will stuff that this forum will survive at least so long.

Napracowaliśmy się, tylko potrzebne nam jeszcze spojrzenie fachowca.

Because I am A person, who 'pleasant' (nie rozumiem uzycia tego slowa tutaj) to create something 'from' OUT OF nothing. I like to produce 'by hand - made jewelry'(ortog)(tu cos nie tak). I'm interested in decoupage, and one
time I 'had even' (zla kol slow even had AN) occasion to assemble piece of 'furnitures' (to jest rzeczownik niepol) what gave me many 'gladdens' (to slowo nie istnieje w jez. ang). I found this site WHEN searching FOR information about my camera. I 'like' (tutaj trzeba uzyc czas przeszly) it immediately, because I found there free materials to create a lot of things for science, fun or gifts.
This website is very 'colored' (zle slowo-popraw) and fun. M
There are cards for many holidays and occasions 'esspecialy' (ortog) Birthday, Christmas...
If you 'aren't' (Prosze tego slowa nie uzywac) quite satisfied with
regular cards you should make a special one of craft and pop-up card,
which 'have' (ale jedna card to l. poj - dlaczego have?) a lot of parts and 'are' (dlaczego 'are jak piszesz o jednej?) 'very impression' (nie rozumiem tego).
“Paper craft" is something in SIMILAR type 'of' TO our Polish cut-out but you
'mast' (mast - co to - o jakim statku piszesz?) also build a thing 'of' WITH it. This site 'presenting' (nie to slowo) every kind of papercraft you could imagine - from simple toys to intricate crafts.
That can 'be also' (zla kol - also be) a beautifull gift for someone special.
The section which I 'recomenden' (ortog) is “Calendars".
There are still many things which I 'didn't' HAVEN'T describeD, because this siTe is so extenSIVE. I think, that this website gives us possibility of
developmental entertainment for THE whole family. I am very happy that I
'descover' (ortog i czas przeszly) it.

I will begin BY writing something about me. My adventure with computers 'have been' (niepotr) 'stared' (ortog) when I was 6. Then my Dad had took me to place where 'he's' (to co napisales to ...'he is', a powinno byc where he worKED) 'work' (niepotr) at this time. Then I started to 'dicover' (ortog) some partS of A computer. 'Offcourse' (ortog) at this time I was interested in computer games and word processorS. 'Then' (niepotr) (tutaj powinno byc...At that time,)this was for me only (a bit of)fun and the first stage of my fascination OF computers. When I was 17 my parents bought A computer and after about 8 months my father bought A modem.
I went through my interests and joined A community which 'know' (czas przeszly KNEW) 'well computers' (zla kol slow - computers well) and 'tweaks and overclocks' (tego nie rozumiem) it. I read a lot and startED (czas przeszly) to help other people with their computer problems. All of 'this' (this odnosi sie do l. poj, a people to tutaj l. mn) people were organised in 'vortal' (cos nie tak) and forumS placed on website adddress: www.tweak.pl and www.forum.tweak.pl. Most often I visited 'alone forum' (the forum alone). After six or seven years I am 'the' AN advanced user of computer and 'advise myself' (nie, cos tu nie tak...lepiej can manage to solve) many problems. Thanks to that 'assisted' (tu sie gubie- co to?) and I still help many people when 'knits' (napewno nie to slowo) something with their 'outfit' (inne slowo). Two years ago my favourite website 'has down' (cos nie tak - went down, was closed?). (This was then regenerated) 'On fast time' (nie rozumiem tego) regenerated as vortal www.purepc.pl. More important is that ON IT 'survived' (nie tutaj) the database (survived) and IT kept all THE old topics. Now, this huge database helps thousands OF people, madcaps and 'that' (co to? ) THOSE people who ARE 'do' (niepotr) not interestED excessively IN 'informatics' (nie to slowo - Information technology-IT). When I search FOR any information about computer 'periphicals' (ortog) I go there. You can find there any information FOR WHICH you have 'been' (niepotr) searched. For 'instans' (ortog) IF you want to buy a new 'compter' (ortog).
Want to find the best elements for you desktop PC.- czy to jest zdanie czy pytanie?
This site 'permits' ALLOWS me to bring to the fore my information about computers. THE site is very readable, because THE most important information 'are' IS shared 'on' BY divisions. This forum 'this' IS my long-standing passion AND will be with me to the end of my life. 'and have arguments will stuff that this forum will survive at least so long' (popraw ta czesc zdania).