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Dear Editor,

I write because I must tell you my opinion about your lastest article in the newspaper. In this article, editor wrote about the light music. He wrote that music is not important in the teenagers life and the music is very hard to sing and dance. It is very sad opinion I disagree, I think music is important in the life of young people, becouse it helps to express emotions and It's possible to be relaxed with music and separate myself from everyday life. I very like music. My favourite music is disco polo because I like dance with my girlfriend and the this music is very slowly and this music is very romantic.
If someone wont tell as yours opinion please write to the editor. Your opinion willl be very intresting and young people must know what we think about music
I hope that we agree with my opinion and I wait for yours letters.

Yours faithfully

I am writing to you because I must tell you my opinion about your latest article in the newspaper. The editor wrote in this article about the light music. He wrote that music is not important in the teenager's life and the music is very hard to sing and dance. It is very sad opinion I disagree with it, I think music is important in the life of young people because it helps to express emotions. Moreover thanks of the music people can it is to relax and separate oneself from everyday life. I like music very much. My favourite music is disco polo because I like dance with my girlfriend. This music is very slowly and it is very romantic.
If someone want to pass on own opinion please write it to the editor. Your opinion will be very interesting and young people must know what it is thought about music
I hope that everybody would agree with my opinion. I am witting for yours letters.



ale dokladnie nie wiedzialam czasami o co Chodzi w tym tekscie. Wiec z gory sorrki za jakies niedociagniecia.

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I write because I must tell you my opinion about your 'lastest' LATEST article in the newspaper. In this article, THE editor wrote about 'the' (niepotr) light music. He wrote that music is not important in 'the' A teenagers life and THAT the music is very hard to sing and dance TO. It is A very sad opinion AND I disagree. I think THAT music is important in the life of young people, 'becouse' (ej no - prosze popraw) it helps to express emotions and it's possible to be relaxed with music and TO separate myself from everyday life.
'I very like music' (to nie jest zdanie - powinno byc I LIKE MUSIC VERY MUCH a nie inaczej.)
My favourite music is disco polo because I like TO dance with my girlfriend and 'the' (niepot) this music is very sloW and this music is very romantic.
If someone wont tell 'as yours' (nie za bardzo rozumiem o co chodzi) opinion please write to the editor.
I hope that 'we' YOU agree with my opinion and I wait for 'yours' YOUR letters.