Notatka z wakacj

Przebywasz na wakacjach za granica. bylas swiadkiem przestepstwa i
zeznajesz na policji, dlatego wrocisz pozniej do domu. zostaw notatke dla
wspollokatora w ktorej:
-poinformujesz jakiego zdarzenia bylas swiadkiem
-podaj gdzie mialo miejsce to zdarzenie
- poinformuj o planowanej wizycie na policji
- obiecaj udzielic szczegolowych inform. w pozniejszym terminie

Hi Agata
Two days ago I saw something terrible. While i was walking to the hotel, where i'm living now, a man was running. When i saw his face he turned his head. He caught women's bag. Then this women started scream so i went to her. Unfortunatly the thief disapeared. It was in London, near the British Museum.
I have to stay here because i will visit a police office. I must testify what i saw. I promise that i will tell you particular informations when i'll come back. I'm sory, but i can't return in Sunday. I have to stay herea few days. I'll call you when i will know when i'll leave.
kisses
Karolina

While 'i' (dlaczego 'I' piszesz mala litera?) was walking to the
hotel, where I'm 'living' (moze lepsze slowo 'staying') now, (I saw a man running) a man was running. When I saw his face he turned his head.
He 'caught' (tutaj to wiecej znaczyloby 'zaczepil' ale przeciez on ukradl) STOLE A 'women's' (women - to l. mnoga od womAN- tutaj womAn's) bag. Then this 'women' WOMAN started TO scream so I went to her. 'Unfortunatly' (ortog) the thief 'disapeared' (ortog).
I have to stay here because I 'will' NEED TO visit a police 'office' (nie - mowimy STATION. I must testify AS TO what I saw. I promise that I will tell you particular 'informations' (informatioN - to jest rzecz. niepol- niema czegos takiego jak 'informations') when I'll come back.
I'm 'sory' (ortog), but I can't return 'in' ON Sunday. I have to stay here FOR A few days. I'll call you when I 'will' (niepotr) know when 'I'll' I'M LEAVING HERE.

Hi Agata
Two days ago I saw something terrible. While I was walking to the hotel, where i'm staying now, I saw a running man. When i saw his face he turned his head. He a woman's bag. Then this woman started to scream so i went to her. Unfortunately the thief disappeared. It was in London, near the British Museum.
I have to stay here because i need to visit a police office. I must testify as to what i saw. I promise that i will tell you particular information when i'll come back. I'm sory, but i can't return on Sunday. I have to stay here for a few days. I'll call you when i know when i'm leaving here.
kisses
K


mam nadzieje ze jest lepiej
serdecznie dziekuje terri za pomoc :)

A dlaczego nie poprawilas, tak jak ja ci doradzilam...
Widze, za duza bledow, ktore ja juz poprawilam - po co to ja sama nie wiem, jak ty dalej po swojemu.