proszę o spr. czy dobrze :) niedużo bo 4zdania !

In spite of the fact that alcohol has a lot of supporters, it should be banned. According to the latest survey in Poland an overwhelming number of people get into alcoholism. For a few years comsumption has risen about 40% In Poland lives the disturbing number of alcoholic. Research has shown there is approximately 700.000 people with alcoholic problems.

Będę bardzo wdzieczny za pomoc ! To dla mnie bardzo ważny tekst. Dzięki !!

According to the latest survey, (ja bym tutaj dala przecinek) in Poland an overwhelming number of people 'get into' (jest ok, ale ja bym to jakos inaczej ujela) alcoholism.
For 'a' THE LAST few years (alcohol?) comsumption has risen about 40%.
In Poland 'lives' LIVE 'the' A disturbing number of alcoholicS.
Research has shown 'there is' THERE ARE approximately 700.000 people with
alcoholic problems.

Serdeczne dzięki Terri !