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Czy pieniadze sa najwazniejsza rzecza w naszym zyciu?

Money are very important thing in our life and in this composition I will consider the pros and cons of being rich.
However,we need money if we want to achieve high standard of life.
Firstly, when we have got cash we can afford to live in luxury. Rich people are usually buy expensive cars,mansions with beatiful gardens and swimming-pools.
Secondly, we can develop our passions which are also very costly, like diving or playing golf.
Thirdly, we are able to assure itself and our family some expensive treatments or education on prestige colleges.

In contrast , con of having a lot of mney is fact, that rich people are living fearfully of their safety because they are usuallycasualtys of kidnapping.
Moreover, there is cartainly of honest feelings other people.

In my opinion the good points outweight the bad points and the money are the most important to hapiness life, but it is individual to decide.

Money 'are' (money to rzecz. niepolicz - tutaj IS A very important thing in our life and in this composition I will consider the pros and cons of being rich.
However,we need money if we want to achieve high standard of
life. (nie rozumiem z czym to zdanie ma sie czymac- czy tylko tak sobie wpisales?)
Rich people 'are' (po co to 'are' tutaj?) usually buy expensive cars, mansions with 'beatiful' (ortog) gardens and swimming-pools.
Secondly, 'we' (czy tutaj liczysz 'nas?' jako te 'rich people' bo raz o nich a raz o 'nas' mowisz?) can develop 'our passions' (aha, to znaczy ze 'my' jestesmy rich) which are also very costly, like diving or playing golf.
Thirdly, we are able to assure 'itself' (co to slowo tutaj znaczy?) and our family some expensive treatments or education 'on' (kalka z polskiego tutaj IN) prestige colleges.

To co napisales to sa odrebne zdania, kazde stoi osobnie, ale one sie nie trzymaja razem.

In contrast, 'con' (?) of having a lot of 'mney' (ortog) is THE fact, that rich
people are living 'fearfully' (nie - tutaj in fear) of their safety because they are usually 'casualtys' (ortog) of kidnapping.
Moreover, there is 'cartainly' (ortog) of honest feelings other people - A CO niby to zdanie ma znaczyc?

In my opinion the good points outweight the bad points and the
money 'are' IS the most important to 'hapiness' (ortog) (tu cos brsakuje) life, but it is (tu cos brakuje) individual to decide.

....Bardzo marnie, widze, ze uzyles czyjasc prace, (ktora pare dnie temu byla na forum) sam nie za bardzo wiedzac co piszesz.

Po pierwsze to ONA:)
Po drugie dziekuje;)
Po 3 , praca zostala napisana wczoraj wieczorem przeze mnie.. ot, tak..oo;p
Po 4 dopiero sie ucze wiec chyba moge robic błedy...
Po 5.. Jeszcze tu wroce;p

>Po 5.. Jeszcze tu wroce;p

To groźba? ;)

haha nie;p bede dalej wrzucac moje wypociny:D

Po pierwsze to ONA: - ...a ja to moge w jaki sposob wywnioskowac?
Po drugie dziekuje; -
Po 3, praca zostala napisana wczoraj wieczorem przeze mnie.. ot, tak..oo;p -....to bylo widac, wiem ze na lepsze Ciebie stac.
Po 4 dopiero sie ucze wiec chyba moge robic błedy.. A kto Ci napisal, ze nie mozesz?.
po 5 Jeszcze tu wroce - .....zapraszamy.