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I have never seen an exibition like the one in the Zachęta Galery before. Although we have the opportunity to see exhibitions of famous artist from other countries in Polish museum quite often but I haven't seen an exhibition of Banksy's art before. To my mind it' s such a pleasant surprise, his art is really great!
Banksy is well know for his unusual art. In my opinion he's a genious - he's so talented, creative, oryginal and a little bit scandalous. It's imposible to classify her works under the heading. His artworks are often-satirical pieces of art that encompass topics such as politics, culture, and ethics.His art has appeared in cities around the world and it's wonderful that in Warsaw we can see his art. Banksy shows for example: homosexual and crime problems. It's very intertesting and extraordinary how he explain the world rules and mechanism in our society. Drawing and graffiti has an almost magical effect on me. Sometimes, when I can't find my road in life and I'm suck in coplete chaos I reach his works and go back to magical world and I feel better. The process of creative discovery is what this art is really about.
Banksy is for everyone, because he allowed us to broaden our imagination. I fall in love with his art from the first see(?) I have nwvefer felt so much joy and exciting at an exhibition. In Banksy's art everybody find something for yourself, without diffrence in age or sex. I reccomend this exhibition to everyone, including those who have not interested in art.

I have never seen an ex{H}ibition like the one in the Zachęta Gal{L}ery before. Although we have the opportunity to see exhibitions of famous artist{S} from other countries in Polish museum{S} quite often {,} {bez:but, wczesniej jest juz "although"} I haven't seen an exhibition of Banksy's art before. {To my mind - moze lepiej: IN MY VIEW?} it's such a pleasant surprise, {BECAUSE?} his art is really great!
Banksy is {well know - WELL-KNOWN} for his unusual art. In my opinion he's a genious{pis. GENIUS} - he's so talented, creative, oryginal{pis. ORIGINAL} and a little bit scandalous. It's imposible to classify {her - HIS?} works under {the - ONE?}heading. {His artworks - lepiej: THEY} are often{-bez myslnika}satirical pieces of art that encompass topics such as politics, culture, and ethics.His art has appeared in cities around the world and it's wonderful that {SZYK: 2-in Warsaw} {1- we can ALSO see his art}. Banksy shows for example{bez dwukropka} {homosexual and crime problems - co masz na mysli? THE PROBLEMS OF HOMOSEXUALS/ HOMOSEXUALITY AND CRIME?}. It's very intertesting and extraordinary how he explain{S} the world{'S} rules and mechanism{S} in our society. {HIS?}Drawing and graffiti has an almost magical effect on me. Sometimes, when I can't find my {road- WAY?} in life and I'm suck in co{M}plete chaos I reach {FOR?} his works and go back to {THEIR} magical world and I feel better. The process of creative discovery is what this art is really about.
Banksy is for everyone, because he {allowed - ALLOWS?} us to broaden our imagination. I {fall - FELL} in love with his art {from the first see(?) - AT FIRST SIGHT} {AND?} I have nwvefer{pis.} felt so much joy and {exciting - EXCITEMENT} at an exhibition. In Banksy's art everybody {CAN} find something for {yourself - THEMSELVES}, {without diffrence in - REGARDLESS OF THEIR} age or sex. I reccomend{PIS!} this exhibition to everyone, including those who {have not interested - ARE NOT INTERESTED albo HAVE NO INTEREST} in art.

jeszcze:
{His} drawing and graffiti HAVE, nie has

Co do stylu - jesli zalezy Ci na nieco bardziej formalnym stylu wypowiedzi pisemnych, staraj sie unikac wykrzyknikow (np. his art is really great!) i form skroconych (it's, haven't) - zmien je na formy pelne - it is, have not, cannot, itp.