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YOUR IDEAL HOUSE

Home Is the only place in the world where we feel so safe and where live people we love. We always get back to it with happiness, besides when we are far away we can feel homesickness.
What is the most important, we create our house according to our liking. I would like to live in a cottage, which would be surrounded by trees and fields.
Inside would be a fireplace where I could sit and get warm. What is more, the all cottage would be made from the wood. There would be really relaxing atmosphere, I could have rest on my red, comfortable sofa. I would like to have colored curtains which would be hanged by big windows.
I would like to have in my house everything I need, so I would create it on my own. Therefore, it's clear for me that there would be my own piano and I would be playing there for hours. Outside my home would be the big garden, where stand table with chairs and there I would have parties with my family and friends. I'm also clearly sure that I would have some pat e.g little dog.

Home 'Is' (is) the only place in the world where we feel 'so' (niepotr) safe and where live people THAT we love. We always get back to it with happiness, besides when we are far away we can feel homesicK.
What is 'the' (niepotrz) most important, we create our house according to our
liking (moze lepiej 'taste').
What is more, the 'all' WHOLE cottage would be made from 'the' (niepotr) wood. I could have A rest (albo I could rest) on my red, comfortable sofa. I would like to have colored (colored czy coloured?) curtains which would be 'hanged' HUNG by big windows.
I would like to have in my house everything THAT I need, so I would create
it on my own.
Outside my home would be 'the' A big garden, where 'stand table with chairs' (zla kol slow ...there would be a table and chairs) and there...
I'm also clearly sure that I would have some pEt..

Home Is the only place in the world where we can feel safe and where
>people we love live. We always get back home with happiness and what is more when we are far away we can feel homesick.
>What is the most important, we create our house according to our
>liking. I would like to live in a cottage, which would be surrounded
>by trees and fields.
>Inside there would be a fireplace where I could sit and get warm. Moreover, my cottage would be made from wood. There would be
>really relaxing atmosphere, I could rest on my red, comfortable
>sofa. I would like to have colored curtains hanging in the
>big windows.
>I would like to have there everything I need, so I would make it feel
>as my own. Therefore, it's clear for me that there would be my own
>piano I would play for hours. Outside my home would be
>a big garden with table and wooden chairs. That would also be a perfect place for parties with my family and friends. I'm also pretty sure that I would
>have a pet e.g a little friendly dog.