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ARE MAN AND WOMAN DIFFERENT?

In the past there were different roles of the sexes, than nowadays. Women were supposed to dress and behave like a woman and they were considered inferior to men. The man was the breadwinner, he earned money while the woman was in charge of the housework and bringing up the children.
The situations changed in the early 20th century , when women won the right to vote and began go out to work. Nowadays we know description of ‘the business woman’, she is bossy, ambitious and always good-looking. Women want to have a career, earn a lot of money, and then they think about children, husband and home. I think that everyone knows that women and men are very different. Psychologist found out that women are mentally stronger that men, and more immune to stress. On the other hand, there are several jobs which are only for men, e.g formula drivers or builders. A lot of people think that women are bad drivers but I don’t think it is truth, because the most of principals of accidents are men.
In my opinion, men and women are mentally different. We are gentle, patient and communicative, we more often cry than men. Men are responsible and sometimes too much jealous.

The danger sports and explorations, Why do people do it?


Humans nature is so unquiet. We want to explore, to teach new things, we have always too less. We are curious about everything which is surrounding us. In my opinion it’s no strange because everything which is new is really good for us, because we can get new experiences.
First of all, people do extreme sports like climbing, parachuting or windsurfing. I would like to try bungy jumping one day. Why do people do that kinds of sports? I think it’s clear, they want to feel fresh air when they are doing some really dangerous and stressing things. There are people who love adrenalin. I think they are needed, because thanked to them we have a lot of new explorations. I love to watch programs about diving and watch that wonderful underwater landscapes. The one thing which really frighten me and I won’t do it is the trip on rollercoaster. I don’t like fast ride.
To sum up, extreme sports are really interesting and I think they joined a lot of people. In fact they are the one of the most liked hobbies. There are a lot of groups and clubs which organize parties for people who love extreme sports. I think the world would be poorer without them.
'ARE MAN AND WOMAN DIFFERENT' (cos tego nie lubie - albo Are men and women different? albo Are a man and a woman different?)? (p.s..musza byc, bo mezczyzni sa z Mars, a kobiety z Venus).

In the past there were different roles of the sexes, than
nowadays. Women were supposed to dress and behave 'like a woman' (nie tak, nie moze byc...womEn...like a womAn- women like women, albo lepiej women ...like ladies) and they were considered inferior to men.
Nowadays we 'know' (cos nie tak - moze we have an impression of) 'description'? of 'the business woman', she is bossy, ambitious and always good-looking. PsychologistS (bo nie jeden to studiowal) HAVE found 'out' (niepotr) that women are mentally stronger that men, and more immune to stress. On the other hand, there are several jobs which 'are' (nie, nie - mozesz tylko powiedziec are considered to be...) only for men, e.g formula drivers or builders. A lot of people think that women are bad drivers, (przecinek przed but)but I don't think 'it' THIS is THE truth, because 'the most of principals' (nie, cos tu nie tak -lepiej...principally, most of car accidents) 'are men' ARE CAUSED BY MEN.
'We' (tutaj nie jest jasno, czy jestes kobieta czy mezczyzna) are gentle, patient and communicative, we 'more often cry' (zla kol slow ...cry more often) than men. Men are responsible 'and' (czy nie lepiej 'but') sometimes WAY too 'much' (wg mnie niepotr) jealous.
'The' (niepotr) Danger sports and explorations, Why do people do it?
'Humans' HUMAN nature is so unquiet. We want to explore, to 'teach' (chyba masz na mysli - LEARN new things, we 'have always too less' (cos tu nie tak - napisz to po polsku).
We are curious about everything 'which is' THAT surroundS us. In my opinion 'it's' THIS IS noT strange because everything which is new is really good for us, because (out of it) we can get new experiences.
Why do people do 'that' THOSE kinds of sports? I think it's clear, they want to feel fresh air when they are doing some really dangerous and stressFUL things. There are people who love adrenalinE. I think 'they' (tutaj nie wiem co masz na mysli) are needed, because 'thanked to them'(prosze nie uzywaj 'thank, thanks to- to nie jest najlepiej ...OF THIS) we have a lot of new explorations.
I love to watch programMEs about diving and watch 'that' THOSE (l. mnoga dlatego ze landscapes) wonderful underwater landscapes. The one thing which really frightenS me and I won't do it is 'the' A trip on A rollercoaster.
I don't like fast rideS.
To sum up, extreme sports are really interesting and I think they 'joined' (joined czy are enjoyed by) a lot of people. In fact they are 'the' (niepotr) one of the most liked hobbies.
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