Prosze o pomoc

Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie mojej pracy... jestem tutaj 1 raz. Temet:Twoj ulubiony srodek transportu.
My favourite transport is plane. I love plane, because they are very confortable and trains, because when I travelling that do not feel shake.
In the plane do not need keep mine baggage. The people tell, that travelling in the plane is dangerous, but I do not fear.
The travelling in the plane is very faster, because the plane must not stand in the traffic jam, on the crossroads and on the stop.
I love motor, too. My favourite model is Kawasaki Ninja. It is a marvellous. The Kawasaki Ninja drive fastest three hundred and fifty kilometres on the hour.
On the crossroads do not stand in the traffic jam, because motor is narrow and fit between the cars.
In the future I want be a driver motor.

Jak cos to to jest moje gadu 11261016. Z gory bardzo dziekuje i pozdrawiam. ;)

My favourite FORM OF transport is THE plane. I love THE plane, because 'they' (they generalnie odnosi sie do l. mnog - a tutaj 'plane' to l. poj, zmien 'the plane' na 'PLANES) are very coMfortable and I LOVE trains, because when I traveL 'that' (niepotr) I do not feel ANY shakING.
In the plane I do not need TO keep 'mine' MY (sprawdz roznice pomiedzy MY a MINE) baggage. 'The people tell' (nie, nie tak - SOME PEOPLE SAY that travelling in 'the' A plane is dangerous, but I do not HAVE ANY fear.
Travelling 'in the' BY plane is 'very' (niepotr) faster, because the plane 'must' DOES not stand in the traffic jam, on the crossroads and 'on' AT the stop.
I love motorCYCKLES too. It is 'a' (niepotr) marvellous. The Kawasaki Ninja CAN drive 'fastest' (niepotr) AT three hundred and fifty kilometres 'on the' (niepotr) AN hour.
'On' AT the crossroads YOU do not stand in the traffic jam, because THE motorCYCLE is narrow and IT fitS between the cars.
In the future I want be a 'driver motor' (cos tu nie tak).(a motocycle driver, czy racing driver?)

W tym ostatnim zdaniu chcialam napisac ze w przyszlosci chcialabym jezdzic na scigaczu (motorze). dzieki za pomoc ;];]] pozdrawiam

I mam jeszcze jedno pytanie, dlaczego w tej pracy nie moze byc "motor" tylko "motorcyckles", sprawdzalam w slowniku, bo probuje zrozumiec swoje bledy [wiekszosc rozumiem] i "motor" to tez motor po polsku, a wlasnie to chcialam napisac, ze kocham rowniez motory

motor w języku ang. to motor, ale w takim sensie, np. motor pralki, silnik, urządzenie, a nie motocykl.