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Solutions to homelessness
Every human being need home to live. When there is a big number of homeless people in society, there is very complex issue to which there are no simple solutions.
One of the most proximate cause of homelessness in Poland is poverty. There is a lots of families with big number of children. It is very difficult to provide family with 4 or even more children. In the most dramatic situations, when parents haven’t got opportunities to hold family, they lose their homes and children are sent to orphanage. Another reason of homelessness is alcoholism. Alcoholics don’t see other sense of life then alcohol and they spend all money for drinking. By the time they can`t stop drinking without help by themselves and as the consequence of that they lose job and they haven’t got money for everyday needs. Another reason of homelessness is low education level. Individual person without any education has small chances to get good pay job, and they haven’t got money to buy home or even rent a room. Statistic shows that 50% of homeless people receive less than $300 per month as income.
One solution is to create local institutions for which the main aim would be organize help for pure families. Without help from outside pure families have very small chances to make their live better. This institutions and local governments should give opportunity should for example organize free diners for children in schools, and support education for children from pure families. Another possibility is organize campaign against alcohol abuse In every local societies. Alcohol can destroy even the best families. In many situations alcoholics become homeless because of drinking. They can`t win the fight against their addiction without help, so if society want fight against homelessness, then local governments must fight against alcoholism as well. Only sober man can realize how senseless is living on the street, after that fight against homelessness can be successful.
Another solution for homelessness is giving possibility for homeless people or for those who can lose homes to get some useful skills. Then they can get good work easier and earn money.
Homelessness is a big problem especially in big cities, but there are very few programs set up to help them. We all need to work together to help those less fortunate because you would want someone to help you if you where in that position, so we should do our best to help them.

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Solutions to homelessness
Every human being 'need' (human being to 'he/she' - to 3os.l.poj - prosze poprawic czasownik) 'A' home to live. When there is a 'big' (uzyj slowo 'large') number of homeless people in 'A' society, there is very complex issue to which there are no simple solutions.
One of the most proximate 'cause' CAUSES of homelessness in Poland is poverty.
There 'is' (ale families to l. mnoga, dlaczego czas l. poj?) a lots of families with 'A' 'big' (nie uzywaj 'big' w ten sposob - tutaj LARGE) number of children. It is very difficult to provide FOR A family with 4 or even more children. In the most dramatic situations, when parents haven't got THE opportunities to hold 'A' family TOGETHER, they lose their homes and children are sent to AN orphanage.
Alcoholics don't see ANother sense of life 'then' THAN alcohol and they spend all THEIR money 'for' ON drinking.

.....By the time they (tutaj cos brakuje, zdanie troche gubi sensu - ...become alcoholics, they) can`t stop drinking without 'help by themselves' and as 'the' A consequence of that they lose THEIR job and they 'haven't' (lepiej DO NOT HAVE) got money for everyday needs.....Napisz to zdanie jeszcze raz - zrob 2 zdania.

Another reason of homelessness is low educationAL level. Individual person without any education has small chances to get A 'good' WELL 'pay' PAID job, and they 'haven't' DO NOT HAVE ANY) got ANY money to buy 'A' home or even TO rent a room. StatisticS 'shows' SHOW (jest ich wiecej jak jedna- a jak tylko jedna to potrzeba kto, kiedy i jak) that 50% of homeless people receive less than $300 per month as income.
One solution (do czego? - nie piszesz) is to create local institutions for which the main aim would be TO organize help for 'pure' (a jakie to sa inpure? -zle slowo-) families. Without ANY help from outside 'pure families' (niema czegos takiego jak 'pure families' - kazdy z nas ma grzechy) have very small chances to make their liveS (families-lives) better. 'This' THESE - dlatego, ze institutions to l. mnoga) institutions and local governments should give opportunitIES (ale do czego?) AND should, for example organize free diners for children in schools, and support education for children from 'pure families' (cos innego tu). Another possibility is TO organize campaignS against alcohol abuse in 'every' ALL local 'societies' (nie za bardzo- prosze inne slowo).
They can`t win the
fight against their addiction without help, so if 'A' society wantS (society to 'it'-3os.l.poj) TO fight against homelessness, then local governments must fight against alcoholism as well. Only 'A' sober man can realize how senseless 'is living on the street' (zla kol slow ...living on the street is), after that, THE fight against homelessness can be successful.
Another solution for homelessness is giving 'possibility' POSSIBILITIES for THE homeless people or for those who (are i fear of losing their homes) can lose THEIR homes (the chance of) 'to' (niepotr) getTING some useful LIFEskills.
Then they can get 'A' good 'work' JOB easier and earn money.
Homelessness is a big problem especially in big cities, but there are
very few programs set up to help 'them' (ale komu - tego w zdaniu niema).
...want someone to help you if you 'where' (ZLE slowo - wher-gdzie - tutaj WERE) in that position, so we should do our best to help 'them' (niestety musisz napisac, kto to 'them' jest).