Proszę o sprawdzenie tekstu.

Prosze o sprawdzenie tej rozprawki :) zawiera one zapewne mase błedów bo jest wynikiem pracy moejgo słownika, translatora i mojej lamanej angielszczyzny :)



There will be theme of my consideration “If stores should be opened to Sunday?”. I arrange bring forward Arguments too and against But draw a conclusion on end.

Believe in closed shops is confession faith Christianity because for confessors These faiths it is day off work.
All deserve of one Day to Rest and relaxation, Time which are can spend with family, friends but I am sure that people working on Sunday have day off.

On the other hand In today's world which is overwork and active on
week-days many people not has shopping time. Observe commodity and Check him quality. There is fact too that shopping its forms of spending free time. Time of shopping is often time for family. There will be next my argument it is Today when there is on labor market so heavily, when people champion for each pound has many staff not mind work on Sunday.

To sum up about it if shops will be opened or close should make up market.
I am behind their open. If people want buy Let's it will be opened stores in this Day. People working will earn person buying spend time so as want.

Z góry dziękuje za pomoc :)

>>>zawiera one zapewne mase błedów ....To napewno moge potwierdzic.
Z tym translatorem wyszedl belkot. Tutaj niema ani jednego dobrze napisane zdania.

'There' (Tam? gdzie tam?- zle slowo) will be THE theme of my 'consideration' (zle slowo) “If stores should be opened 'to' (zle slowo) Sunday?".
I (a gdzie WILL? arrange TO bring forward 'Arguments' (dlaczego duza litera?) 'too' (zle slowo) FOR and against 'But' (dlaczego duza litera?) AND draw a conclusion 'on' AT THE end.
(nie napisalas kto tak wierzy? potrzeba 'I') believe in 'closed' CLOSING shops (tutaj zaczynam sie troche gubic i )'confession' (o czym ty piszesz - confession to tylko w kosciele) faith Christianity because for 'confessors' (zle slowo) 'These' (dlaczego duza litera?) faiths it is A day off work.

Wiecej nawet nie czytam. Nie mam zamiaru robic tego za Ciebie.
Ten tekst wymaga znajomosci ang. gramatyki (ktorej tobie jeszcze brakuje) slownictwa (ktorego tobie jeszcze brakuje).
Nie zabieraj sie za rzeczy ktore przerastaja twoje umiejetnosci.

Nie prosiłam o zrozbienie tgo za mnie. Usiadłam i starałam się sama coś napisać. Zgadzam się z moimi wielkimi brakami w języku angielskim ale wierz mi, że nie pisałam tej rozprawki dla własnej przyjemności, jeżeli pani mi coś zadaje to ja to robie i to ona decyduje czy z czymś sobie poradze czy nie.

Mimo wszystko dziękuje za pomoc.

Poprawione według wskazówek Teri

Will be the of my consider “If stores should be opened on Sunday?”. I will arrange to bring forward arguments for and against but and draw a conclusion at the end.

I believe in closing shops faith Christianity because for confessors these faiths it is a day off work.
All deserve of one Day to Rest and relaxation, Time which are can spend with family, friends but I am sure that people working on Sunday have day off.

On the other hand In today's world which is overwork and active on
week-days many people not has shopping time. Observe commodity and Check him quality. There is fact too that shopping its forms of spending free time. Time of shopping is often time for family. There will be next my argument it is Today when there is on labor market so heavily, when people champion for each pound has many staff not mind work on Sunday.

To sum up about it if shops will be opened or close should make up market.
I am behind their open. If people want buy Let's it will be opened stores in this Day. People working will earn person buying spend time so as want.