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Dear Dave!
I'm writing to tell you something about my holidays as I promised.
So... At the beginning of holidays I was in my cousin wedding. It was really nice, but only two weeks later me and my scouting troop gone to Giby - small village on Suwalszczyzna. We got there by bus and we stayed in tents for three weeks. Pomorze lake was really close (like 20 metres). We had some time to unpack and acommodate. Even though we spent three weeks in forest I firmly affirm the food and drink were really good.
In the evenings we always were some concerts or festivals so we had a lot of to do.
At the end of this month I will fly to Lisboa to parcipate in international project "Living on one street".
I hope we meet soon so that I could show you some photos.




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Dear Dave'!' (po co ten wykrzykniak - czy na kolege sie krzyczy?)
So... At the beginning of THE holidays I was 'in' AT my cousin'S wedding.
It was rally nice, 'but' (nie wiem czy 'but' tutaj odpowiada) only two weeks later 'me and my scouting troop' (jabym to inaczej...together with my scounting troop I) 'gone' WENT to Giby - A small village 'on' IN 'Suwalszczyzna'(tutaj lepiej ...in the district, area of..).
THE Pomorze lake was really close ('like' (po co to 'like?- albo bylo albo nie bylo- nic niemoze byc 'like 20 metres' - bo 20 metres to sa wlasciwie 20metres)-20 metres). We had some time to unpack and 'acommodate' (tu cos brakuje-...ourselves..) Even though we spent three weeks in THE forest I 'firmly affirm' (zly register -moze inne slowa) the food and drink were
really good.
In the evenings we 'always were' WERE ALWAYS AT some concerts or festivals so we had a lot 'of' ('of' czego?) to do.
At the end of this month I will fly to 'Lisboa' (prosze o poprawna nazwe) to parcipate in THE international project "Living on one street".
I hope we WILL meet soon so that I 'could' (moze lepiej 'can') show you some photos.

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