proszę o sprawdzenie opowiadania.

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It was midnight. I and my friend - Marta were walking alone when suddenly we heard notice. When we turned we saw an UFO. Strange figures in hoods left it, which in spite of our protests led us into UFO. After a bit we got off the ground (we rose up into the air)
Spaceship hit the ground . There was somebody in the spaceship with us. It was a women. Her strange yellow eyes shone in the dark. `Put these girls in the conversion room!` said the woman to her guards. The guards had yellow eyes too.
I was open my eyes. Ruth was awake. `Where are we?` I asked. `we’re somewhere in space, I think’ answered Ruth. ‘ Have you seen anybody yet?` I asked
`No I haven’t` said ruth-`But what’s that? I can hear something`
The door opened. The woman with the strange yellow eyes came into the room. `Welcome to Kitra!` she said. ‘I’m Azdie, the ruler of this planet. Nobody on your planet knows about Kitra because it’s long way away. You will stay here forever! Azdie smiled. Never!-shouted Ruth. Next I jumped up and threw his space jacket over Azdie’s head. Ruth tied her to a chair. At that moment there was a ringing noise. ` It’s the alarm` I shouted ‘ What are we going to do now?`
The alarm continued to ring. I and Ruth were in a tunnel outside yhe conversion room. We ran to the end of the tunell. Then we saw a strange machine in front of us. ‘What’s that` I asked. ‘It’s a transporter’ said ruth. ‘ Why doon’t we use this machine to get back home?’ I asked. ‘ OK, we don’t have time. Let’s try the transporter. We pressed the red button and the ship floated into air. Minutes later we arrived on earth. When we left the transporter, it disappeared. We went home and I went to bed. The danger was gone. I was safe…
Note:
The next day I asked Ruth about that adventure. She looked at me dziwnie and said 'Good story but probably it is your dream and she walked away.' But I didn’t imagine it! It was all true…


proszę o sprawdzenie i podanie błędów. bo na pewno jakieś są.
proszę o chociaż pobieżne sprawdzenie, bo to jest na jutro.
My friend, Marta, and I were walking alone....we heard a NOISE nie notice.

left it, and in spite of our protests, they led us into their ship.

>Spaceship hit the ground . Poleciał i zaraz spadł?

>It was a women. WOMAN

>I was open my eyes. I OPENED (bez was)

> I and Ruth were
Ruth and I were...

She looked at me
>dziwnie and said 'Good story but probably it is your dream and she
>walked away.'

strangely....it was probably just a dream and she walked away.
Dlaczego na początku była Marta, a potem Ruth?
bo zmieniałam imię, uznałam że lepiej napisze polski jakieś.;) BAAAARDZO dziękuje;*
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