my holiday= prosba o poprawe

chcialbym kogos prosic o sprawdzenei i poprawe moich bledow w wypracowaniu ktore napisalem. odrazu mowei ze nei ucze sei dlugo angielskiego lecz chcialem sprawdzic swoje mozliwosci i npisac to wyparacowanie;p i prosze jeszcze o przetlumaczenei jednego polskiego wyrazenie ktore jest w cudzyslowie. z gory dziekuje;*


Most of holiday spent in my village. I slept to midday. Before I met with my friends. We were going on the lakes and swimming there. In the afternoon I played on the volleyball. When I went to home, I had taken a shower and eaten dinner. Evening I sat round a bonfire. "W jedną z niedziel" I went in the bridge and I jumping from him. The end of July I and my friends went to Ożanna next to Leżajsk. We got there by car. We lived there for four days in a tent near a lake. We can’t use electrical goods. All days we're swimming and enjoying each other's company. Most often we ride a bicycle and played football and volleyball. Thanks to camping I forget about duty in my house. When we ate dinner we watching clouds whitch were drifting across in the sky. In August I was back with my journey. I spent there four magnificent days. This is my best vacation, because I didn't have time to be bored. In August I was back with my journey.

Most of THE holiday I spent in my village. I slept 'to' TILL midday. 'Before' (ale before czego...tutaj brakuje-przed...) I met with my friends.
In the afternoon I played 'on the' (niepotr) volleyball. When I went 'to' (niepotr) home, I 'had taken' TOOK a shower and 'eaten' ATE dinner. IN THE evening I sat round a bonfire. On one Sunday, I went 'in' TO the bridge and I 'jumping' JUMPED from 'him' IT. The end of July 'I and my friends' (jest przyjete, ze mowimy ..my friends and I) went to Ożanna WHICH IS next to Leżajsk.
We 'can't' COULDN'T use ANY electrical goods. 'All days' (moze lepiej..During the day) 'we're' WE WENT swimming and 'enjoying' ENJOYED each other's company. Most often we 'ride' RODE (czas przeszly) a bicycle and played football and
volleyball. Thanks to camping I 'forget' FORGOT about 'duty' DUTIES in my house. When we ate dinner we 'watching' WATCHED clouds 'whitch' WHICH were drifting across in the sky.
In August I was back 'with my journey' (cos tu nie tak). I spent 'there four magnificent days' (zla kol ..4 magnificent days there.).
'In August I was back with my journey'-juz to napisales...nie wiem dokladnie co chcesz przekazac tutaj.