prosze o szybkie sprawdzenie!!!!

proszę o sprawdzenie dwóch krótkich tekstów, bo nie wiem czy czegoś tam nie poplątałam;)
1. my best friend
My friend is Gosia.She is sixteen. Her best meal is fish. Gosia is short and slim. She's got big blue eyes and long blond hair. I like she because she is very energetic and dynamic person.She loves music. She likes playing guitar and dancing. We know each other for many years. She is my best friend.

2.my village
I live in Wilków. It is small village. This village is inhabited by about thousand people.There is grammar school, library, station and the youth club. We can spent free time riding bicycles, in the youth club or going for a walnk in fresh air. I like this village, because it is realy beautiful place.

1. My (best) friend is Gosia.
Her 'best' (nie, tutaj 'favourite') meal is fish.
I like 'she' (she-ona, tutaj HER) because she is A very energetic and dynamic person.
She likes playing THE guitar and dancing. We HAVE knowN each other for many
years.

2.It is A small village. This village is inhabited by about A thousand people. There is A grammar school, library, 'station' (police, fire?) and
'the' A youth club. We can spent free time riding bicycles, in the youth
club or going for a 'walnk' WALK in THE fresh air. I like this village, because
it is A realy beautiful place