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The Poles have got strong and weaker points. Other nationals tthink about Poles various things. poles are wise, hard-work-ing and clever. Some people speak/say(?) that Poles are unintelligent, impolite, work badly or that they are inhospitality.Poles have got interesting idea on life. They don't lack the motivation to learn the languages or sreach the work. Sometimes Poles are bad opinion because in some countries people think that Poles steal a/the (?) car or that work illegally. They don't know cultures of foreign countries in which/who(?) they stay. I think that they shouldn't speak ill of Poles because they don't known us.
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>>I think that they shouldn't speak ill of Poles because they don't known us.


I think that they shouldn't say about Poles (very) bad because they don't know us.
Lukciu, nie poprawiaj tego co jest dobrze. W tym zdaniu powinno być "speak" (którego nie używa się TYLKO do j. obcych), a nie "say".
The Poles have got strong and weaker points (tutaj mozna cos dodac).
Other nationals think 'about THE Poles various things' (zla kol slow...various things...). Poles are wise, 'hard-work-ing' (dlaczego to tak napisalas/es wystarczy 'hard-working') and clever.
Some people say that Poles are unintelligent, impolite, work badly or that they are 'inhospitality' (nie - tutaj INHOSPITABLE.
Poles have got interesting 'idea' (tylko to jedna idea czy wiecej?) on life. They don't lack the motivation to learn 'the' (niepotr) languages or
'sreach' (ortog) FOR 'the' (niepotr) work. Sometimes Poles 'are' (nie, nie robisz kalki z jez. polskiego - tutaj HAVE) A bad opinion because in some
countries people think that Poles steal 'a/the' (niepotr) carS or that THEY work
illegally. They don't know THE cultures of foreign countries in which they stay. I think that they shouldn't speak ill of Poles because they don't knoW 'us'.(ale lepiej napisz...don't know them)

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