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Last week, I was in XY supermarket.It is quite big supermarket,which offers wide variety of products.
My firstly impression was quite well. I saw colorful displays of fresh fruit and vegetables, so I came up to it. It turned out that vegetables were bad or unripe. (Tu chcę napisać,że zauważyłem dział z pieczywem i czym prędzej sie tam udałem, lecz nie wiem jak).. I was disappointed because instead mouth-watering aroma of freshly baked bread. I could smell stench of burning. It was awful. Then I went to meat department. All kinds of meat looked unappetizing. I was discouraged and I made a resolution to go out. Suddenly I could smell wonderful scent of freshly cut flowers. It was amazing. I saw flower section where were a lots of beautiful flowers. I bought a bunch of red roses.
I wouldn't recommend this supermarket but I would recommend the flower section. I think I will shop there again but only flowers.

Last week I was in XY supermarket. It is quite A big supermarket which offers wide variety of products.
My first impression was quite good. I saw colorful displays of fresh fruit and vegetables, so I came up to THEM. It turned out that THE vegetables were bad or unripe. THEN I SAW THE BAKER`S AND DECIDED TO GO THERE AT ONCE. I was disappointed because instead OF mouth-watering aroma of freshly baked bread I could smell stench of burning. It was awful. Then I went to THE meat department. All kinds of meat looked unappetizing. I was discouraged and I made a resolution to go out. Suddenly I could smell wonderful scent of freshly cut flowers. It was amazing. I saw THE flower section where THERE were LOTS OF beautiful flowers. I bought a bunch of red roses.
I wouldn't recommend this supermarket but I would recommend the flower section. I think I will shop there again but only FOR flowers.

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Last week I was in XY supermarket. It is quite a big supermarket
which offers 'A' wide variety of products.
I saw 'colorful' (AmE-colorful, BrE-colourful) displays of fresh fruit and vegetables, so I came up to them.
I was disappointed because instead of mouth-watering aroma of freshly baked bread I could smell THE stench of burning.
Suddenly I could smell THE wonderful scent of freshly cut flowers.
...but I would recommend the 'flower' (mozna tez florist section) section.