Rozprawka v.2

Nowadays, computers are the most popular apparatus. We can use computer as telephone, radio or television . Many people can not imagine their life without computer. However many scientists claim that using computers can ruin normal interhuman relations. Are they righ?
One major advantage of using computers is that computers can help us to do our boring and tiring work. Computers make life easier than few year ago and can do very difficult enterprises instead of us. In addition they allow us to communicate with people all over the world. Last but not least computer can be helpful in learn.


One major disadvantage is that usage of computer overtime can ruin our relationship, relations with our friend. We may have worse mark in school. If we spend to much time using computer, we can destroy our health. In addition computers can ruin our budget because many of them are not energy-efficient, so they need a lot of energy to work.
In my opinion computer is one of the most important human invention. Usage of computer have more pluses than minuses. All things considered, If we use computer reasonably, we can not ruin our relation with other people and we can spend our free time with our friends.

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1...popular DEVICES /apparatus to grupa urządzeń, narzędzi itp mających określoną funkcję, albo przeznaczonych do specyficznego, konkretnego celu. Wydaje mi się, że komputer służy różnym.
2...as A telephone...
3...their LIVES...A computer
4. po However przecinek...HUMAN relations
5...that THEY can /żeby nie powtarzać za często tego samego wyrazu
6...A few.../few znaczy mało policz.
7...difficult TASKS /enterprise to przedsięwzięcie, inicjatywa, przedsiębiorstwo. Sądzę, że nie o tym myślałeś. Chyba żeby.
Po In addition też przecinek /wyraz wtrącony, to samo po not least
8...in LEARNING. 9...A computer...ruin our RELATIONS WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS...MARKS AT school
10...are RATHER ENERGY-CONSUMING /energochłonne. Wprawdzie fuel-efficient znaczy paliwooszczędny, ale z tego co pamiętam, enery-e. znaczy energowydajny. Jeśli koniecznie chcesz napisać tak jak masz, to sobie sprawdź, bo mi się nie chce.
11..of A computer / albo COMPUTERS – staraj się zwracać uwagę na te przedimki
12...our RELATIONS ...and SIMULTANEOUSLY we can....free time IN A PLEASANT WAY

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