can U check it?:) please:)

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Gdybyś zechciał/a mi to sprawdzić, byłabym ogromnie wdzięczna. :)
Moja nauczycielka jest człowiekiem bardzo wymagającym. Proszę o zwrócenie mi uwagi na każdy, najmniejszy nawet błąd. :P:)

THE SECOND CHANCE
Everyone in town knew Adam. By some, the old man was judged to be a bit strange. He wore old, dirty clothes, lived in a small flat, yet helped homeless. Youth admired him.
But he had a gloomy secret...
20 years ago he had a well-prospering company and had been a busy man trying to raise his 15-year-old daughter, Anna, alone. But he hea had to close his business. He had lost everything, started drinking and neglecting Anna. The child was afraid of her new noisy father. She had started getting worse grades and former hard-working businessman had become very angry at her. He had even hit her. Yes, those days he had been a bad father... No wonder that after reaching the age of 18 Anna had moved out to her friend's house.
Despite the fact that her move had revived Adam (he had stopped drinking and started to change), they had not seen each other since that time. The man was trying to contact his daugter, but she did not want to talk to him.
And this year a miracle happened. One day before Christmass Eve Adam received an invitation to a Christmass supper. From Anna. He was the happiest man in the world.
Next day, nervous, but filled with hope, Adam arrived at Anna's house. He took a deep breath and knocked on the door..
He wore old, dirty clothes, lived in a small flat, yet helped THE homeless. 'Youth' THE YOUNG (mozesz dodac 'people') admired him.
(dodalabym SOME) 20 years ago he had a well-prospering company and had been a busy man trying to raise his 15-year-old daughter, Anna, alone. But he 'hea'? had to close his business. He had lost everything, HAD started drinking and
neglecting Anna. The 'child' (ale ona miala 15 lat - lepiej uzyj GIRL) was afraid of her new noisy father. She 'had' (niepotr) started getting worse grades and THE former hard-working businessman had become very angry at her. Yes, ON those days he had been a bad father...
The man was trying to contact his 'daugter' (ortog), but she did not
want to talk to him.
'And' (lepiej pasuje slowo BUT this year a miracle happened. One day before 'Christmass' (ortog) Eve, Adam HAD received an invitation to a 'Christmass' (ortog CHRISTMAS supper. IT WAS from Anna. (mozesz dodac ...THAT DAY) He was the happiest man in the world.
THE next day, nervous, but filled with hope, Adam arrived at Anna's house.
He took 'a deep breath' (jabym tu dala..a few deep breaths) and knocked on the door....

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