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Every storm brings with it hope, that somehow by morning, everything will be made clean again, and even the most troubling stains will have disappeared, like the doubts over his innocence...or the consequence of his mistake. Like the scars of his betrayal...Or the memory of his kiss.So we wait for the storm to pass, hoping for the best. Even though we know in our hearts, some mistakes are so indelible, nothing can wash them away.
some mistakes are so indelible, (that) nothing...
>brings with it

itself
artur-
wg mnie -
>>>Every storm brings with it hope,...
jest ok
Jak tak teraz patrze, to raczej masz racje, znaczenie jest jasne wiec nie trzeba uzywac reflexive pronouns...

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