list prywatny

Spedzilas 2miesiace w Angli. Napisz list do gospodyni u ktorej zatrzymalas sie podczas pobytu. W liscie:
-podziekuj za goscinnosc i odnies sie do warunkow jakie Ci zapewniono
-podkresl jaka atmosfere stworzyla podczas Twojego pobytu i w jakiej uroczystosci wzielas udzial na jej zaproszenie
-wspomnij wycieczke, ktora razem odbylyscie i napisz co szczegolnego sie wydarzylo
-zapros gospodynie do Polski i wyraz nadzieje ze bedziecie mogly kontunuowac wasze dyskusje

Bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie:)

Dear Helen,
How are you? I hope you’re well. I would like to thanks you for your hospitality. I’m happy that I could to slept in your guest-room. I very liked this room because had a lovely view of the lake.
Atmosphere in your home was very friendly. I remembered to today’s day your birthday. I’m very grateful that you invited me on this celebration. I could to meet lots of new people and talking with them.
Yesterday I was seeing the photos, which we take in Scotland. I never forget those beautiful places: many long and deep-sea arms, firths and lochs. I remembered our trip by ferry on Shetland Islands. It was fantastic!
I would like to invite you to my country – Poland. I hope, that we will be continue ours discussion about culture and tradition England.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
XYZ

I would like to 'thanks' ('thanks' to znaczy 'dzieki' a tutaj 'podziekowac'- prosze poprawic) you for your hospitality. I'm happy that I could 'to slept' (nie - I could SLEEP) in your guest-room. I 'very liked' (KTO to tak was uczy? Prosze zwrocic jemu/jej uwage- i wiecej tego nie powtarzac - a teraz napisac tak, jak w podreczniku ucza) this room because 'I' had a lovely view of the lake.
THE atmosphere in your home was very friendly. I remembered THAT 'to' (niepotr) today's 'day' (niepotr) IS your birthday. I'm very grateful that you invited me 'on' (moze lepiej TO) this celebration. I could 'to' (co z tym 'to'- tutaj niepotr) meet lots of new people and 'talking' TALK with them.
Yesterday I 'was seeing' SAW the photos, which we 'take' (TOOK-czas przeszly) in Scotland. I WILL never forget those beautiful places: many long and deep-sea arms, firths and lochs. I remembered our trip by ferry 'on' (mysle, ze TO) THE Shetland Islands.
I hope, that we will 'be' (niepotr) continue 'ours' OUR discussion about THE culture and traditionS (bo chyba wiecej jak jedna) OF England.

Dziekuje za pomoc:) mam jeszcze pytanie co do tego jednego zdania:
- I very liked this room... powinno byc -I very like this room... ? Bo nie rozumiem:(

Powinno być: I liked this room very much...radzę zapamiętać...

Wielkie dzieki:)!

Teraz mi się przypomniało tak mówił Borat...he he:P