E-mail do nauczyciela

Mam do napisania email do nauczyciela na temat swojej przeprowadzki. Mógłby ktoś sprawdzić te moje wypociny? Byłabym bardzo wdzięczna. ;)

Dear Mr Brown
I hope you and your family are fine.
I am writting to tell you about that we have moved to our new home in Olsztyn.
It was not very easy. When we arrived to the new houses, my father has seen that he forgot keys. We have to came throught a window. Now we are very happy. The houses is near the town centre. It is bungalow but it is big enough for all us.
If you ever come to Olsztyn, you are more than welcome to stay with us.

Best wishes

XYZ

Dear Mr Brown
I hope you and your family are fine.
I am WRITING to tell you THAT (bez about) we have moved to our new home in Olsztyn.
It was not very easy. When we arrived to the new HOUSE , my father NOTICED that he HAD FORGOTTEN THE keys. We have to came IN THROUGH a window. Now we are very happy. The HOUSE is near the town centre. It is A bungalow but it is big enough for all us.
If you ever come to Olsztyn, you WILL BE more than welcome to stay with us.

Best wishes

arrived IN

Dziękuję bardzo. :)