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Work is very important part of our life. We spend majority time in it.

Everything what we do since childhood is preparation for our future work. School, studios, long hours of learning. Everything it for obtain better work in future.

I think that a lot people choose profession only with big wages. They forget that money aren`t most important. We be mistaken, that money will give us sufficing motivation. Average person works by near 40 years. Work can be bored through time. Especially, when we don`t like our employ. Earned money after some time stop we be glad. We will execute occupance with more smallest engagement. Our chief will notice and sack us at the end.

Reverse situation is when we like work and it interests us. Then we execute our occupance with passion. Working is awful nothing, because give us pleasure. We will spead out and be self-realization.

Summing up. I think that we should be led at choice of work also our hobby, because it will pay dividends in future.


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Work is A very important part of our life. We spend THE majority time 'in it' (nie-bo to bez sensu...tutaj AT WORK).
Everything 'what' THAT we do since childhood is (a form of)preparation for our future work. School, 'studios' (tego slowa nie rozumiem tutaj), long hours of learning. Everything 'it' IS (in order to) 'for' (niepotr) obtain better work in THE future.
I think that a lot people choose (nie, zrob to inaczej...WELL-PAID)professions. 'only with big wages' (NIEPOTR). They forget that money 'aren`t' (NIE, bo 'AREN'T znaczy 'are not' a money jest niepol. i tutaj l. poj) IS NOT THE most important. We 'be' ARE mistaken THINKING that money will give us 'sufficing' SUFFICIENT motivation. AN average person works 'by near' (nie, NEARLY 40 years. Work can be 'bored' BORING through time. Especially, when we don`t like our employ.
Earned money after some time stopS US 'we'(we-to znaczy my') beING glad.
We will 'execute occupance with more smallest engagement' (to jest calkowicie zly register - pomysl o czyms innym, nie rozumiem co chciales powiedziec).

THE reverse situation is when we like THE work and it interests us. Then we
'execute our occupance with passion' (nie wiem, gdzie znalazles to - ale to nie pasuje tutaj).
...Working is awful nothing, because give us pleasure. We will spead out and be self-realization....(Tych zdan nie rozumiem, napisz je po polsku.)
I think that we should be 'led at choice of work also our hobby' (nie, zrob to inaczej...choose work which is also our hobby), because it will pay dividends in THE future.

...Working is awful nothing, because give us pleasure. We will spead out and be self-realization....


Praca nie jest niczym strasznym, bo daje na m przyjemność. Rozwijamy się i samorealizujemy.

Dzięki Ci terri jesteś wspaniała.

>...Working is awful nothing, because give us pleasure. We will spead
out and be self-realization....
Work is nothing awful/bad/terrible, because it does give us pleasure. We gain new experiences. (nie jestem pewna czy cos takiego jak self-realization znaczy to samo co chcesz powiedziec).

Dziękuje ślicznie :]