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It was dangerous but I kenw I need to do it. I was only one problem to
pick up those big, colorfull and perfectly round apples from a small orchard, this obstacle was a huge and danger looking dog behind a wooden fence. I was rally starved and worn out so I realised I have to do it. I had been went to a tree, when the dog started bark loudly and chased me. I ran as fast as I can but the animal still was very close to me. Finally I had been menaged to escape and climbed on the apple-tree. I had been saeted on a branch when a old man shouted: " Don't worry I will take Max to his kennel and you can eat fruits if you are hungry." I felt that my cheeks are purple and I was ashamed on this situation. I shpuld ask the farmer on permission but I didn't do it. I went down on earth and ate sweet apples to midday. When I felt full I visited farmer's house nad thanks for kindness. Meanwhile it started to rain havily and the man invite me inside. I told him that I got lost and for much time I didn't eat anything for thet reason i picked up fruits without a permission. The farmer told mr that he understood my hard situation and additionally gave me a map.
I went with clear conscience.
>It was dangerous but I 'kenw' (ortog) I 'need' NEEDED to do it. 'I' (znaczy TY bylas problemem?) was only one problem to pick up those big, 'colorfull' (ortog) and perfectly round apples from a small orchard, this obstacle was a huge and 'danger' (danger to jest rzecz. tutaj potrzeba innej czewsci zdania) looking dog behind a wooden fence. I was 'rally' (ortog) starved and worn out so I realised I have to do it. I had 'been went' (co to?-nie wiem co chcesz tutaj przekazac) to a tree, when the dog started TO bark loudly and chased me. I ran as fast as I 'can' COULD, but the animal WAS still 'was' (niepotr) very close to me. Finally I 'had been' (niepotr) 'menaged' (ortog) to escape and climbed on the apple-tree. I 'had been' SAT 'saeted' (ortog ale i tak niepotr) on a branch when aN old man shouted: " Don't worry I will take Max to his kennel and you can eat THE fruits if you are hungry." I felt that my cheeks 'are' WERE (bo to czas przeszly) purple and I was ashamed 'on'IN this situation. I 'shpuld' (ortog) HAVE askED the farmer 'on' FOR permission, but I didn't do it. I went down 'on'TO THE 'earth' (nie, tutaj GROUND and ate THE sweet apples 'to' UNTIL midday. When I felt full I visited THE farmer's house 'nad' (ortog) 'thanks' (NIE- 'thanks', to mniej wiecej 'dzieki' tutaj chodzi o dziekuje-podziekowalam - THANNKED) for HIS kindness. Meanwhile it
started to rain havily and the man inviteD me inside. I told him that I
got lost and for much OF THE time I didn't eat anything for 'thet' (ortog) reason 'i' (I piszemy duza litera) picked up THE 'fruits' (uzyj FRUIT without 'a' HIS permission. The farmer told 'mr' (ortog) that he understood my hard situation and additionally gave me a map.

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