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I am trying to describe my enligh teacher, which teaching us subject „ ……….. “. She was born in …. . She studied in … . She has been teaching more less five years in … . Before she did not work in different school. She has got husband and one child, a son. As her personality, she is impatient, not mean and tolerant. She try to be a strict teacher. She is also nice and cheerful. Her main habits: sleeping to much, going to bed early. She is not smoking. Her favorite color is purpose. She likes volleyball, watching TV and music. Usually she listens radio in a car. She haves a drive license. She does not have a pets. And when she was a little girl she did not have any cats and dogs. She does not like spiders. She likes travelling. She spent last vacation at the seaside in Poland. She was in UK one time. Her favorite meal is a pizza and she is not fun of meat. She does not like shopping to much and talking about Polish government and politics. She was tried to learn other languages, like: German, Russian, Italian.
She very likes her work. It is her main hobby, her “life”. The worst thing in her job are impolite students. When she came to our class she was nice surprise. So first impression was good.

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I am trying to describe my 'enligh' (ortog) teacher, 'which' (NIE_ jak mowimy o ludziach, to piszemy WHO albo whom, tutaj WHO) IS teaching us THE subject
OF" ...... “. She was born in .... . She studied in ... .
She has been teaching 'more less' (albo 'more' albo 'less' albo 'more or less'), THAN five years in ... .
Before THAT she did not work in A different school. She has got A husband and one child, a son.
As TO her personality, she is impatient, not mean and tolerant. She 'try' TRIES
to be a strict teacher.
Her main habits: sleeping toO much, going to bed early.
...She is not smoking....To co napisales to /ona sie nie pali..a miales na mysli..ona nie pali..SHE DOES NOT SMOK. Her 'favorite' (czy to AmE- wtedy OK) color is 'purpose' (nie - calkowicie inne slowo).
Usually she listens TO THE radio in a car. She 'haves' (jakas nowa wersja, I have, you have, she has, we have, you have, they have - wybierz jedno z nich), a 'drive' DRIVING license.
She does not have 'a' (przed l. mnoga nie dajemy 'a') pets.
She spent HER last vacation at the seaside in Poland. She 'was' HAS BEEN
in THE UK 'one time' (lepiej ONCE). Her favorite meal is a pizza and she is not 'fun' (nie-masz zle slowo. Fun-to przyjemnosc...a o cos innego chodzi) of
meat. She does not like shopping toO much and talking about Polish
government and politics. She 'was' (byla?) HAS tried to learn other languages, 'like' such as: German, Russian, Italian.
'She very likes her work' (tutaj masz zdanie calkowicie zle..'very' nie zawsze znaczy 'bardzo'-prosze poczytac o tym w podrecznikach- a tutaj...SHE LIKES HER WORK VERY MUCH).
When she came to our class she was 'nice'NICELY surpriseD. So THE first impression was good.