PILNE :) Prosze o sprawdzenie

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Prosze o sprawdzenie listu...pilne :)

Hello Tomek

How are you?? What are you doing??As you know recently i pass the exams for the certificate of secondary education and now i decided that i will go to London. In Poland i can't find any Job, and I think that In London i can get better education.. At the beginning parents was very angry, they said that I nowhere go, because they think that i will not managed without their help. I said them that i will be there with my friend and I have 18 years old, i can cared by yourself. They agreed but only if i will call to them every day. I am going to London in two months. I will go to London 24 July. Can you look for any flat for me? When i will be In London i what that you go with me to some flats and looked it. Can you write me how many money i must have there that i can good live in this country? And how i can get to centre from airport?? Write to me soon
As you know recently 'i' (I piszemy zqwsze duza litera) 'pass' (ale tutaj mowisz o czasie przeszlym PASSED) the exams for the certificate of secondary education and now 'i' I decided that 'i' I will go to London. In Poland 'i'I can't find any jobS, and I think that in London 'i'I can get A better education.. At the beginning MY parents 'was'(ale przeciez parents to wiecej jak jedna osoba, prosze poprawic czasownik) very angry, they said that I 'nowhere go' CANNOT GO ANYWHERE, because they think that 'i'I will not 'managed' MANAGE without their help. I said TO them that 'i'I will be there>with my friend and I 'have 18 years old' (no ladnie, reszta tekstu byla na poziomie, ale tutaj....prosze przeczytac i to dokladnie jak formulujemy zdanie..Mam x lat po ang), 'i'I can TAKE 'cared' CARE 'by' OF 'yourself' (ciebie? tutaj MYSELF. They agreed, but only if 'i'I will call 'to' (niepotr) them every day.
I will go to London ON THE 24 July.
When 'i' will be In London 'i' 'what' (co?-nie rozumiem tego) that you go with me to 'some flats and looked it' (zla kons zdania - niegram. ..look at some flats).
Can you write me how 'many' MUCH money 'i' I must have there that 'i' can 'good' (nie, nie tak..) - live WELL in this country? And how 'i' can get to THE centre from THE airport?
czy mi też mógłby ktoś to sprawdzić?? pliss

Dear Sylwia,
How are you? I'm happy because you want to by my penfriend. I'm writing some [słów o mnie?].
I'm a very nice and shy. I like spending my free time with sister and friends. We often play games. We seldom to the cinema but we watch the TV every Saturday. I'm keen on playing music and dancing. I'm crazy about surfing the net. I just love it. My sister also fond of it.
I'm not fond of playing baseball and hiking. I'm not too keen on going to the theatre.
Write and tell me about your hobbies.
Sandra

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