przepis - sprawdzcie..

To preparation of pizza's cake wanted are following components : flour, yeast, water and salt. We to flour add salt and yeast dissolved in water. We mix the whole, till moment when all components join beautifully. Then we leave discerning worn cake on about 10 minutes and we wait until it grows. Next we rearrange cake on gill, which is smeared fat. When we this already make, cake one should smear tomato's concentrate . Cleaned mushrooms we must finely cut, jump and arrange on cake . We add cut onion, tomatoes also. The whole we rubbed off cheese richly. Obviously every can add different components. I added such, because this are my favourite. Prepared cakewe put to oven and bake by about 25 minutes.

Proszę o sprawdzenie.

'To' (nie, zacznij inaczej...In order to prepare) 'preparation of' (niepotr) A pizza's cake 'wanted' (you need - potrzebujesz) 'are' THE following components :
flour, yeast, water and salt.
'We' (niepotr) to flour add salt and yeast dissolved in water....zrob to zdanie inaczej...Add the salt and.....
'We' (dlaczego uzywasz 'my?-po co to-tutaj dajesz instrukcje) Mix the whole, till A moment when all THE components 'join beautifully' (lepiej...are thoroughly mixed). Then 'we' (niepotrzeba tego 'we-) Leave THE 'discerning worn' (zle konotacje-troche inne slowa) cake 'on' FOR about 10 minutes
and 'we' (niepotr) wait until it grows. Next 'we' (niepotr) rearrange cake on THE gill, which is smeared WITH fat.
When 'we this already make' (inaczej...prosze postarac sie pisac konstrukcje zdan wg ang. gramatyki - When this is complete), 'cake one' (niepotr) IT should BE smearED WITH 'tomato's' (nie - tutaj zwykle TOMATO) concentrate .
'Cleaned mushrooms we must finely cut, 'jump' and arrange on cake. ....Prosze napisac to wg ang gramatyki.
We add A cut onion AND tomatoes. 'also' (niepotr).
The whole we rubbed off cheese richly. ...prosze wg ang gram....
Obviously every can add different components. I added 'such' (to znaczy jakie), because 'this' (ale components to l. mn) are my favourite. Prepared cake we put to oven and bake 'by' FOR about 25 minutes.

Cleaned mushrooms we must finely cut, 'jump' and arrange on cake. ....Prosze napisac to wg ang gramatyki.

czyli to będzie tak? Cut cleaned mushrooms finely and arrange on cake. tak?

>tak?
Tak - ale jak wiedzialas, to dlaczego od razu tak nie zrobilas?