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Working as a doctor is a very popular job. Many childrens says they want to be a doctor in future. But do they know what does this work really mean?
It has many advantages but many disadvandages too.
There are several arguments for working as a doctor.First, it is a rewarding job, because doctors help sick and injured people to recover.
They are pleased when people recovery to health. Most of people are thankfully for cure. For example parents are very thankfully when their childrens get well.
Secondly, doctors are rarely aut of work. There is always a demand for people to treat the sick or injured. Futhermore there is a lot possibility of work- doctors can work in hospitals, clinics or private consulting rooms.
Thirdly this is an interes. ting job. Every day it happen something new. You never boring and it is always many things to do.
On the other hand there are also disadvantages to being a doctor. Firstly it is a tiring job.Some patients demand all day and night medical attention. Doctors works shifts and often work at night.They often have to be in touch because it may be sudden emergency.
In addition, it can be depressing job. Doctors often see people suffering. Sometimes someone die during an operation and it is impossible to rescue him.Then doctors demand psychological help.
Futhermore person who wants to be a doctor has to be dedicated, because it requires many years of study. They have to study hard and learn a lot to pass exams. Many people want to study it and you must be very clever to land to Academy.
To sum up I thing it is a good job for ambitious people. I cant be a doctor because im too vulnerable. When you are persuasive and you want to help other people this is a job for you.

Many 'childrens' CHILDREN 'says' SAY THAT they want to be a doctor in THE future. But do they know what 'does' (niepotr) this work really meanS?
They are pleased when people 'recovery to health' (RCOVER THEIR HEALTH (albo make a speedy recovery). Most of THE people are 'thankfully' THANKFUL 'for' OF THE cure. For example parents are very 'thankfully' THANKFUL when
their 'childrens' (|children to juz l. mnoga, nie dodajemy -s) get well.
Secondly, doctors are rarely 'aut' OUT of work.
Fthermore there is a lot OF possibility of work- doctors can work in hospitals, clinics or private consulting rooms.
Every day 'it happen something new' SOMETHING NEW HAPPENS. You ARE never 'boring' BORED and 'it' THERE ARE 'is' (niepotr) always many things to do.
Some patients demand MEDICAL ATTENTION all day and night 'medical attention' (niepotr). Doctors 'works' WORK (works to tylko do 3os.l.poj) shifts and often work at night.They often have to be in touch because 'it' THERE may be A sudden emergency.
In addition, it can be A depressing job.
Sometimes someone dieS during an operation and it is impossible to rescue 'him' (daj tutaj THEM).
Futhermore A person who wants to be a doctor has to be dedicated,
because it requires many years of study.
Many people want to study 'it' (ale co to 'it' jest-?) and you must
be very clever to 'land' (lepiej GET A PLACE AT THE 'to' (niepotr) Academy.
To sum up I 'thing' THINK THAT it is a good job for ambitious people. I can't be
a doctor because I'm too vulnerable. 'When' IF you are persuasive and you
want to help other people this is a job for you.

naprawdę serdeczne dzięki!!! jestem wdzięczna :)