List - sprawdzenie

Zadanie:
You have recently moved to another town. This is part of a letter you received from a friend.
List:
Hope you like the new area. What are your neighbours like? Have you made any new friends? What about your new classmates? Write back soon.
Jenny
Moja odpowiedź:
Dear Jenny,
Well, how I`m seeing you know, that I have moved to Warsaw. Message fastly spread. So I live on a suburbs with my brother, which has been studying in this city. I like Warsaw, because it is the biggest city of Poland. I have two neighbours` family. First are very nice and I like going to them home. Second family aren`t nice as first. They are a nosey parker. And them son , which is same old as me, has been picking up my younger sister. I have made any new friend – my neighbour Dirk. He`s very fine and funny. He like sport from the all swimming. You know that I am going to first class high school, so I have new classmate. All the people on my class are cool and helpful. When I am not know how make a homework they make this with me. I enjoy that I`m in the Warsaw, but I can`t wait to see you. Bye for now.
Kamil.

Jakie błędy zrobiłem? Moglibyście sprawdzić? Byłbym wdzięczny... i też czy tak powinien wyglądać angielski list prywatny - składnia itp.

how I`m seeing you know,

to nie ma sensu po angielsku

Message
>fastly spread.
To też nie.

So I live on a suburbs with my brother, which has been
>studying in this city.

in the suburbs
nie używa się "which" odnośnie osób

>I have two neighbours` family.
To znaczy: Mam rodzinę dwóch sąsiadów.

First are very nice and I
>like going to them home.
The first one is very nice and I like visiting them.

Second family aren`t nice as first.
The second family isn't as nice as the first one.

And them son , which is same old as me, has been
>picking up my younger sister.

powtórz sobie różnicę między "them" a "their"
o which już pisała wyżej
chcesz picking up czy picking on?

as old as I am

I have made any new friend - my
>neighbour Dirk.
...a new friend

He`s very fine and funny.
fine to nie za bardzo pasuje, może "cool"?

Dalej też są błędy. Najpierw popraw te.

Well, 'how I`m seeing you know' (tego nie rozumiem), that I have moved to Warsaw.
'Message fastly spread' (tego nie rozumiem).
So I live 'on a' IN THE suburbs with my brother, 'which' (jak o ludziach to WHO) has been studying in this city. I like Warsaw, because it is the biggest city 'of' IN Poland.
...I have two neighbours` family...lepiej I have two families as neighbours).
THE first are very nice and I like going to 'them' THEIR home. THE second family 'aren`t' ARE NOT AS nice as first. They are 'a' (niepotr) nosey parkerS (bo jak mowisz o family, to chyba ona ma wiecej jak jednego czlonka - wtedy nosey parkerS). And 'them' (przypomnij sobie roznice pomiedzy 'them' a 'their')THEIR son, 'which' WHO is THE same 'old' AGE as me, has been 'picking up' (dating?) my younger sister. I have made 'any' (nie rozumem tego?)(czy to ma byc A?) new friend - my neighbour Dirk. He`s very fine and funny MAN. He 'like' (ale 'he' to jest 3os.l.poj , do czas. rego 3os.l.poj cos dodajemy - zgadnij co to jest) sport 'from the all' (tego nie rozumiem) swimming. You know that I am going to THE first class OF high school, so I have A new classmate. All the people 'on' IN my class are cool and helpful.
When I 'am' DO not know how 'make' TO DO 'a' (niepotr) MY homework they 'make' (NIE- prosze nie robic to z polskiego 'robia' - tutaj jest inaczej - HELP ME WITH this, albo THEY DO THIS.. with me. I enjoy that I`m in 'the' (niepotr) Warsaw, but I can`t wait to see you.