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Dear Agnes,
Thank you for your letter! I'm sorry that I didn't answer earlier, but i was busy with my school.
London seems a magnificent place, I regret that I've never been there. My city isn't as interesting and large as your, only 67 thousand ppl live here. B is located in the centre of Poland, far from the sea or mountains. There are many block of flats (I live in one of them) and more and more shops, supermarkets, so the assortment of goods is better than it used to be. Although, I think that the choice of clothes shops is limited and it's difficult to find high quality goods. Unfortunately, there are only one cinema and one disco called 'Manhattan', but nothing interesting is happen there... Besides, young (but not only) ppl have problem with finding a good and suitable job, so the unemployment is high. However, B has a few attractions for tourists, eg. the old manor-house surrounded by lovely, branchy trees (because it's situated in the park), now in this building is the museum. Other curious structure is the medieval church with amazing stained-glass windows, sculptures and paintings. Moreover, B offers a rich variety of sports facilities like tennis courts, sports halls, skating rink, swimminpools and in particular sports fields. Everyone can find something for yourself/themselves (?). As you see my city is very ordinary, but after all I hope you'll visit me this summer
Drop me a line soon, I'm waiting with impatience on your letter!
Love,
Aga

bardzo proszę o pomoc...

I'm sorry that I didn't answer earlier, but 'i' (I duza litera) was busy with my school (mozesz dodac 'work...my schoolwork).
My city isn't as interesting and large as yourS, only '67 thousand' (napisz to 67,000 'ppl' PEOPLE live here. B is located in the centre of Poland, far AWAY from the sea or THE mountains.
Unfortunately, there 'are' IS only one cinema and one disco called
'Manhattan', but nothing interesting 'is happen' HAPPENS there... Besides, young
(but not only) 'ppl' PEOPLE have A problem ...
....now in this building is the museum....zrob to zdanie inaczej...This building houses the museum
'Other' ANOTHER curious structure...
Moreover, B offers a rich variety of sports facilities like tennis courts, sports halls, skating rink, swimminG pools and in particular sports fields. Everyone can find something for 'yourself' (tutaj themselves)/themselves.
I'm waiting with impatience 'on' TO your letter!

Bardzo, bardzo dziękuję! :)