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Dear My Simpson,
I wrting in response to advertisement in the nawesppapres 'The Times'. It Yours Firm searchs person On position sales representative on the bookshop on the centre England. I would like to apply for the post. As for my experience, I have working in the shop in book on the learning english and other languages. For the past two years I have been working in Library, my boss was Satisfied work with me. I enclose my CV with my forst Employer. In 2007 I graduated from studies Philology polish and Philology english so I know perfect english languages and I speak Deutch and French fluently. I have been good contect on the other people. I very sympatish person and I Exact (dokładna) and Systematic.
I hope i may be grented an interview.
Wait for fast answer.

Your sincenely

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>>>so I know perfect english
No, jak juz tak piszesz, to oczekuje cos wiecej od ciebie.
To trzeba napisac od nowa...masz pare zdan ktore sa ok - a reszta jest belkot.
Akurat to zdanie nie odnosiło się do mnie bo nie znam za dobrze Języka Angielskiego.
A nie mógłbyś mi powiedzić co jest konkretnie źle?

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