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Hi!
I came to London a week ago. I am living in very friendly family but I am not pleased.
I am sharing my room with other student from France. He doesn't talkative and he takes offence often. Moreover our room is small and tight.
I wuld like to change my place of residence.
Can you look for other room for me?
I will be grateful.

Love to your family.
XYZ

wiem, że są literówki jak np. wOlud ale chodzi mi o poprawność gramatyczną :P

I am living 'in' WITH A very friendly family but I am not pleased.
I am sharing my room with ANother student from France. He 'doesn't' IS NOT
talkative and he OFTEN takes offence. 'often'.
I would like to change my place of residence.