general gap-proszę o pomoc!!!

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I think that nowdays general gap is very popular problem in every family.
The differences between parents and their children are very clear, resutling for different opinions/views of the life/ world, experieces, age and life in different times.
In my opinion children, especially teenagers want to be independent, original and cool, ukazując to poprzez zachowanie, strój, upodobanie muzyczne, co kłóci się z poglądami rodziców.
Attitudes to life is different too, because parents used to live in another times where everythings weren't so accessible lake/as now, so they are carefuler and thriftier then children now.
I think it's hard to find any compromise, because every person is different, but we should find it to life wtihout fights and disputes.

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I think that nowdays 'general' (zle slowo- napewno nie o tym myslisz) gap is very 'popular' (oj, nie nie, to nie jest popular - tutaj inne slowo) problem in every family.
The differences between parents and their children are very clear,
resutling 'for' IN different opinions/views of 'the life/ world' (nie mozesz to tak, ...'of life' albe 'of the world'), 'experieces' (ortog), age and life in different times.
Attitudes to life 'is' (ale attitudes to l. mn - a 'is' to l.poj) different too, because parents used to live in another 'times' TIME where 'everythings' EVERYTHING 'weren't' (napisz to inaczej....WAS NOT) so accessible 'lake' (jezioro?-to slowo niepotr) as IT IS now, so they are 'carefuler' (niema takiego slowo - ...) and thriftier 'then' THAN children ARE nowADAYS.
I think it's hard to find any compromise, because every person is
different, but we should TRY TO find it to 'life' (tutaj chyba myslalas o czasowniku) 'wtihout' (ortog) fights and disputes.
dziękuję :) a wiesz jeszcze jak to zdanie napisać:

In my opinion children, especially teenagers want to be independent, original and cool, ukazując to poprzez zachowanie, strój, upodobanie muzyczne, co kłóci się z poglądami rodziców.
Mysle, ze chodzi tu o 'generation gap' - konflikt pokolen? 'general' znaczy 'ogolny'.
NIE 'popular', raczej 'common' problem.
A teraz to zdanie, ktore zaczyna sie od 'In my opinion (...), 'ukazujac to' - 'they manifest it by their behaviour, clothes they wear and the kind of music they like, which are more often than not disapproved of by their parents.'
'More careful and thrifty than their children.'
(...) ' we should try to work out a way of life without fights and disputes.'
To tak na marginesie tego, co napisala terri...

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