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Dear John,
How are you? I hope you’re well. I’m sorry I haven’t written for so long but I was very busy.
I’m writting to you to say I’ve got a scholarship to London University. I’m really very happy but I want to ask you about a few things. Firstly, could you tell me how are the cost of living and transport in London. Is it hard to find a cheap flat to rent? I also want to know how people spend their free time in this city? Tell me which places are worth to sightseeing. Maybe someday we’ll go together visit British Museum? I’m planning to arrival at Heathrow Aiport on 12th September 2006 at 2.30 p.m. It would be great if you could pick me up from the aiport.
Anyway I’ve to finish. Give my regards to your parents.
Take care
XYZ

I'm 'writting' (ortog) to you to say THAT I've got a scholarship to London
University. I'm really very happy, but I want to ask you about a few
things. Firstly, could you tell me 'how' WHAT 'are' IS the cost of living and
COSTS OF transport in London.
Tell me which places are worth 'to' (niepotr) sightseeing. Maybe someday we'll go together TO visit THE British Museum? I'm planning to 'arrival' (tutaj trzeba czas. a 'arrival' nim nie jest) at Heathrow Aiport on
12th September 2006 at 2.30 p.m.

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