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I do not believe in prejudices. I has always believed this is complete nonsense. I changed a sentence until Friday and was a Friday the thirteenth.
The evening I forgot to set the alarm clock and slept in. When I woke up, the watch pointed 7 a.m. I run into the kitchen to eat breakfast , I packed books to the backpack and hasten clothed myself. Before I looked at the clock output, was 7.20 a.m.! A bus arrives at 7.15! In haste put the jacket and shoes and dash run to the bus stop. I sat near old women, in front of me had sat some two teenagers. I was sitting is silence and I was peering in the window, when the girls laughed.At outset I do not know why the girls looked at my shoes, but when I looked at it I thought to literally burn with shame! I had two other shoes! What do I do ? I get off at the next bus stop, and quickly ran to my home to change my shoes. It turned out that I had not with me keys to my house.
I do not believe in prejudices. I HAVE always believed this is A complete
>nonsense. I HAD NOT changed MY MIND until Friday and IT was Friday the
>thirteenth.
>IN the evening I forgot to set the alarm clock and slept in. When I woke
>up, the watch SHOWED 7 a.m. I RAN into the kitchen to HAVE MY breakfast
>, I packed MY books INto the backpack and hastenED TO GET DRESSED. THEN I
>looked at the clock, IT was 7.20 a.m.! MY bus arrives at 7.15! In A GREAT HURRY
I put ON MY jacket and shoes and dashED to the bus stop. I sat DOWN
>NEXT TO AN old womAn, in front of me some two teenagers WERE SITTING. I was
>sitting IN silence and I was peering THROUGH the window, when the girls STARTED
>laughING.At FIRST I DID not know why the girls WERE LOOKING at my shoes, but
>when I looked at THEM, I thought I WOULD literally burn with shame! I had two
DIFFERENT shoes! What WAS I TO do ? I GOT off at the next bus stop, and
>quickly ran home to change my shoes. THEN it turned out that I had
>not HAVE MY HOUSE KEYS...
THEN it turned out that I
>had
>>not HAVE MY HOUSE KEYS...

Lepiej bedzie: 'that I did not have my house keys...'
>I do not believe in {superstition}. I...
>THEN it turned out that I
>>had
>>>not HAVE MY HOUSE KEYS...
>
>Lepiej bedzie: 'that I did not have my house keys...'

nie tylko lepiej, ale wlasnie tak ma byc!
Masz racje, oczywiscie 'superstitions'... Thanks!
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