BARDZO proszę o sprawdzenie 2 rozprawek

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Rozprawka „za i przeciw” na temat: „Praca – przekleństwo czy błogosławieństwo człowieka?”


Work – is it good or maybe bad?
Firstly, man have to work to earn money for living, but also to fill the time. When time is unlimited even to most interesting activities become less attractive. Limited time gave motivation to have as much pleasure from some enjoyment as it is possible.
Secondly, even holidays would lost they flavour when it is lifelong.
Thirdly, at work man meet new people, some of them became colleague, some friends or even spouse.
Finally, successful life means successful career, what would be left without work?
The most important disadvantage is that work is often a source of frustrating, health problems or even depress. People are afraid that thay can lose their job
Moreover for a successful career at work man sacrificed they family, friends and other no-work aspect of life. They hasn’t got contact with their own children end don’t know anything about them.
Finally a lot of work became in dangerous condition f.g. dust, high or low temperature, darkness or high altitude.
To conclude, man has to work to not go mad, but also has to find balance between work and private life. Working tool little is as well wrong as working too much.


Rozprawka „za i przeciw” na temat: „Internet dobrym sposobem zawierania nowych znajomości – argumenty za I przeciw”


In these days the internet is very popular. Access to internet is possible from almost whole planet from mobile phone or PDA not only from computer. But could it be a way to meet a new friend?
Firstly, it gives almost unlimited new user to meet. Moreover it’s easy to find someone with similar interests or hobbies. In addition via internet you can talk when you feel like it an with people from any country, religion or and culture
Finally the most important favour it is that is possible to share very intimate details and stay anonymous.
The main important disadvantage is that people on the other side man not telling the truth. On the other hand, is it really communication? Without face-to-face contact, only with writing.
Besides, internet relationships are superficial, knowing someone only from e-mails or chat won’t gave full and truly opinion about someone.
At least, friends from internet won’t be able to help in real life, they couldn’t make shopping for us or watch the children therefore they can’t relieve real friends
All things considered, internet may be a good way to meet new people, but it need to be cautious and it never replace face-to-face meet.
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