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You are Ryan.Your grandmother is ill so you have gone to her home with your parents.Write a friendly letter to Daniel.Remember to aly out your letter correctly and to start and end in a friendly manner.Include this information:
-explain where you are and why
-ask about his exams
-say you are looking forward to the holiday and explain what preparations you have made
-tell him how he can contact you while you are at your grandmother's home

Dear Daniel
I'm sorry I haven't been in touch recently but my grandmother is illing and I with parents must go to her home.
I hope you are having a great summer and that all you exams are over.Yesterday, I pass my last exam.Fantastic! Now I have free time and start to relax.I fell be relieved.
Guess what! I/m going to seaside in Italy with two friend from school.Do you want to come withs us? That is nice ideas.You must have money and time to drive.I'm sure youwill like Piter and Ryan.We're gaving on the second Sunday in July.Please drive!
Get in touch with me soon.My phone number is 22-232-242.I'm waiting for you at home my grandmother's.
Yours,
XYZ

I'm sorry I haven't been in touch recently, (przecinek przed 'but') but my grandmother is 'illing' (to slowo nie istniej w jez. ang - napisz ILL) and I 'with parents must go to her home' (zla kol slow...must go...).
Yesterday, I 'pass' (czas przeszly-'ed'-) my last exam.
Now I have free time and (tutaj cos brakuje - modal?) start to relax.
I 'fell' (fell-znaczy cos innego , tutaj FEEL) 'be' (nie rozumiem uzycia 'be' w tym zdaniu) relieved.
I'm going to THE seaside in Italy with two 'friend' (a dlaczego to slowo nie jest w l. mn-jak piszesz 'two'?) from school.Do you want to come 'withs' (literowka- ale WITH) us?
That is nice 'ideas' (ideas to l. mnoga, ale przeciez 'is' to l. poj-popraw)
You must have money and time 'to drive' (nie wiem czy to masz na mysli, czy myslisz, ze on bedzie prowadzil samochod?).
I'm sure you will like 'Piter' PETER and Ryan.We're 'gaving'(zle slowo- mysle, ze GOING) on the second Sunday in July.
'Please drive!' (napisz to zdanie po polsku - bo tutaj cos nie tak)
(A gdzie slowo'PLEASE?) get in touch with me soon.
I'm waiting for you at THE home OF my 'grandmother's' (nie, nie tak...at the home of my grandmother, albo ..at my grandmother's home).

I'm sorry I haven't been in touch recently, but my grandmother is ill. I and my parents must visit grandmother.I hope you are having a great summer and that all your exams are over.
Yesterday, I passed my last exam.Fantastic! I have free time and can start to relax.I feel relieved.Guess what! I’m going to the seaside in Italy with two friends from school.Do you want to come with us? That is nice idea.You should be have money and time.I’m sure you will like Peter and Ryan.We’re leaving on the second Sunday in July.Please say yes!
Please Get In touch with me soon.My phone number is 292-222-222.I’m waiting for you at the home of my grandmother.

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>I'm sorry I haven't been in touch recently, but my grandmother 'is' (tutaj mozesz napisac ...grandmother has fallen ill).
'I and my parents' (nie, jest przyjete, ze dajemy siebie (I) na drugim miejscu...My parents and I must visit MY grandmother.
'That is nice idea' (cos tu nie tak - jak to ma byc pytanie to Do you think it's a nice/good idea?, mozesz tez...we all think it's a good idea.)
You should 'be' (to jest niepotr) have (tutaj mozesz dodac 'some') money and time.