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My name is Kasia.Im 19 years old. I live with my boyfriend in a small village near xxx.
I work on week days but I learn every weekend in secondary school.
In the past I learned in Hotel Technical School.

I have not enough time for amenities like walking in the forest and
meeting with my friends.
I spend a lot of time on learning. I have no special interests, once I
collected postal stamps but I don't do it now. Now I'm doing
everything that I have time to do.

Generally I like to listen a music - like most of us.
In the evenings I'm watching TV or reading a book. Also I like going
to the cinema or theatre. I like to travel very much. I'm always
dreaming about a journey to the Majorka Island by the plane, but my
boyfriend opposite this idea. He thinks that traveling on the plane is
very dangerous, but I'm not afraid to fly by plane, I like challenges.

In my life the most important is family and friends. They stand by me
each moment. I feel that I would able to get around
without them in hard moments. I don't like to be alone when I'm not
have people to conversations.

I'm afraid of darkness. I'm getting sleep only when light is turn on.
Generally i don't like talk a lot about me, I like to listen Rother
people when they talk about them.

I work on weekdays, (przecinek przed 'but') but I 'learn' (lepiej ...study) every weekend in A secondary school.
In the past I 'learned' (tutaj mozesz dac...attended/studied) 'in' AT A Hotel Technical School.
I have not enough time for 'amenities' (to slowo nie za bardzo pasuje-) like..
Also I like going to the cinema or TO THE theatre.
'I like to travel very much' (to zdanie nie jest jasne - czy bardzo lubisz podrozowac, czy daleko i wszedzie podrozowac)
I'm always dreaming about a journey to 'the' (niepotr) Majorka Island by 'the' (niepotr) plane, but my boyfriend 'opposite' (zle slowo - znajdzi inne-blizko ale nie to slowo) this idea. He thinks that traveling 'on the' BY plane
is very dangerous, but I'm not afraid 'to fly by plane' (mozesz napisac..of flying).
In my life the most important (ale co?- important co?) is family and friends. They stand by me AT 'each' EVERY moment. I feel that I would BE ((would be czy would NOT be) able to get around without them in 'hard' (lepsze slowo - difficult) moments. I don't like to be alone when 'I'm not' (cos nie tak..tutaj I DO NOT -mozesz ...when I don't) have people to 'conversations' (nie, to kalka z pol. - napisz...to talk to).
'I'm' I GO 'getting' (niepotr) TO sleep only when THE light is turnED on.
Generally I don't like talk a lot about me, I like to listen 'Rother' TO OTHER
people when they talk about themSELVES.

I work on week days, but I study every weekend in secondary school.
In the past I attended at a Hotel Technical School.

I have not enough time for pleasures like walking in the forest and
meeting with my friends.
I spend a lot of time on learning. I have no special interests, once I
collected postal stamps but I don't do it now. Now I'm doing
everything that I have time to do.

Generally I like to listen a music - like most of us.
In the evenings I'm watching TV or reading a book. Also I like going
to the cinema or to the theatre. I like to long travel very much. I'm always
dreaming about a journey to Majorka Island by plane, but my
boyfriend think is a bad idea. He thinks that traveling by plane is
very dangerous, but I'm not afraid or flying , I like challenges.

In my life the most important thing is family and friends. They stand by me
at every moment. I feel that I would not be able to get around
without them in difficult moments. I don't like to be alone when I don’t
have people to talk to.

I'm afraid of darkness. I go to sleep only when thr light is turned on.
Generally i don't like talk a lot about me, I like to listen to other
people when they talk about them selves.
Czy tak dobrze?

" in a secondary school"

I work on weekdays, but I study every weekend in a secondary school.
In the past I learned Hotel Technical School.

I have not enough time for pleasures like walking in the forest and
meeting with my friends.
I spend a lot of time on learning. I have no special interests, once I
collected postal stamps but I don't do it now. Now I'm doing
everything that I have time to do.

Generally I like to listen a music - like most of us.
In the evenings I'm watching TV or reading a book. Also I like going
to the cinema or to the theatre. I like long travel very much. I'm always
dreaming about a journey to Majorka Island by plane, but my
boyfriend thinks that is a bad idea. He thinks that traveling by plane is
very dangerous, but I'm not afraid of flying , I like challenges.

In my life the most important is family and friends. They stand by me
every moment. I feel that I would not be able to get around
without them in difficult moments. I don't like to be alone when I don't
have people around me.

I'm afraid of darkness. I go to sleep only when the light is turned on.
Generally i don't like talk a lot about me, I like to listen to other
people when they talk about themselves.

Poprawiłam to jeszcze raz. Teraz dobrze?:)