Sprawdzenie informal letters

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Dear Amy!
Thank you a lot for your last letter. It was nice to hear from you. I'm sorry I haven't written to you earlier but I had to organise some things concerning my trip to Mallorca.

I'm writing to you, because I want to tell you about thip trip. I'm, on Mallorca, on a beach holiday. I have been here for two weeks and I'm having a wonderful time. The best thing here is the beach. The sand is almost white, palm's are so big and beautiful and the sea is real so warm. Everything will be great if the rooms won't be so poorly furnished. The beds are so uncomfortable, there is no bathroom in the room and I have to bring my own bedding.
Anyway, Mallorca is the best island on which I have ever been.

Well, that's all my news. Please, write to me soon and tell me something about your holidays.

Love,
XXX

P.S Give my best regards to your parents.
byłabym wdzięczna za sprawdzenie.
mógłby mi ktoś to sprawdzić?
I'm writing to you, because I want to tell you about 'thip' THIS trip.
...'palm's' (tutaj to l.mn. - PALMS) are so big and beautiful and the sea is
'real' (zle slowo- popraw) so warm. Everything 'will' (zle- WOULD be great if the rooms 'won't' (tego nie lubie - tutaj WERE NOT) 'be' (niepotr) so poorly
furnished. The beds are so uncomfortable, there is no bathroom in the
room and I 'have' HAD to bring my own bedding.
Dziękuję Ci bardzo :)

z tym 'thip' to zwykła literówka :)

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