Proszę o sprawdzenie pracy

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It was in April this year. I felt very bad. I had high temperature and headache. I was coughing. My doctor told me I had been sick. It was a flu. I broke down. It didn’t make any difference to me if I hadn’t an important exam next day. But I had! This situation made me terrified. It was an exam which should shows level of my knowledge after 3 years learning in gymnasium and I couldn’t write it because I was sick. I remember I was sitting in my room and crying a lot, when my Mum came into the room. She smiled nice and told me I could write exam good and I shouldn’t worry about it. I still felt angry with me, her, situation and all world. Next day I went to school with high temperature . I remember I was cold, very cold. I felt sick and nervous. I wrote an exam how I could best, but I still was thinking it had been too hard for me and I was stupid. A few weeks later I was healthy and I knew my results of exam. It was an unforgettable moment in my life, because it turned out I had one of the best results in my class and also school. I was surprised and so proud of myself. My mother had right.

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