Proszę, prosze o sprawdzenie opisu zdj :)

This is one of my favourite photos. I was with my family at grandfathers. This photo has been made long ago. In the picture I sitting on shoulders my dad. This photo remember me times when I wass small girl. I had long blond hair and I wearing a blue T-shirt and I wass very happy. Then, life was simple. This is my fouvorite photo bacause I like allude thise time. I keep this photo table in my room. I like to look at this picture bacause it is an image of happy life, small girl. I smile when I look on this photo. I like this photo so please not lost thise.


Napewno,napewno jest wiele błędów :( nie jestem z angola najlepsza a slowniki internetowe czasem oszukuja na maxa dlatego prosze o sprawdzenie :) Wiem ze tekst jest smiesznie prosty ale nie chodzi tu o wymyslanie skomplikowanych zdan tylko poprawne konkretne opisanie mojego zdjecia :) z gory dziękuje :)

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prosze nie wariowac i wklejac tego samego tekstu co 5 minut. Nawet nie dajesz szansy zeby ktos poprawil, a musisz sie liczyc z tym, ze ludzie nie siedza to 24/7 czekajac na teksty do poprawienia.
Takie zachowanie mnie naprawde....(daj dowolne slowo)

I was with my family at MY grandfathers (ale czy to byl jeden grandfather, wtedy 'grandfather's, jak oboje to grandfathers). In the picture I AM
sitting on THE shoulders OF my dad (albo ...my dad's shoulders). This photo 'remember' (pamieta? - nie, nie tak, REMINDS me OF THE times when I 'wass' (ortog)A small girl. I had long blond hair and I wearing a blue T-shirt and I 'wass' (dlaczego piszesz WAS z 'ss) very happy.
This is my 'fouvorite' (ortog) photo 'bacause' (prosze nauczyc sie pisac to slowo bezblednie!) I like TO allude TO 'thise' (ortog) time. I keep this photo ON THE table in my room.
I like to look at this picture 'bacause' (prosze to poprawic!) it is an image of A happy life AS A small girl.
I like this photo so 'please not lost thise' (nie wiem do kogo to mowisz - czy to sa instrukcje dla kogos...- napisz to po polsku)