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Above all I would take to a desert island a piano. I start to play when i were young. And when i have a free time, i play very often. It makes me feel good and give me satisfaction(?).
I would take books I didn't read yet.When I read, I don't control what's going to happen and I can really relax. Reading stops me from thinking about my problems.
Surely I would take to a desert island a ball. I don't imagine don't to play football for a year. I might improve my technique.
On a island I would need some a tent. If night was cold or if it rained, he would be me vital and he would be my safe place(?). I might sleep in tent too.
And I would take my suit(?) too. Around the island will be surely much water. I'll have very many time and I might improve my swimming. Moreover I like sport very much.

Above all I would take (tutaj daj co - a piano) to a desert island. 'a piano'. I startED (czas przeszly-to juz bylo) to play when 'i' (I duza litera) 'were' (WAS (I was, you were....) VERY young. 'And' (prosze nie zaczynac zdan z 'and' When I have a free time, I play very often. It makes me feel good and giveS me (mozna dodac 'great') satisfaction.
I would ALSO take books I 'didn't' HAVEN'T read yet. When I read, I 'don't' CAN'T control what's going to happen and I can really relax.
'Surely' (nie, nie w tym miejscu) I would (surely) ALSO take (a ball) to a desert island. 'a ball'. I 'don't' CAN'T imagine 'don't' (co to z tym 'don't' jest- uzywasz jego niegram.- NOT BEING ABLE to play football for a year.
On a island I would need some 'a' (niepotr) tent. If THE night was cold or if it
rained, 'he' (w jez. ang. tent to IT) would be 'me' (nie w tym miejscu) vital FOR ME and 'he' IT would be my safe place. I might sleep in THE tent too.
I would ALSO take my suit. Around the island THERE will 'be' surely BE much
water. I'll have very 'many' MUCH time and I might improve my swimming.

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