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Have I ever told you about the time I was attacked by a stranger?

You know that my mother always give me notice that I never can't talk to foreigner. Also she told me that if some car will stopped close to me men from this car will abduct me. Naturally I was young and I belive my mum totally.

This story befall when I was 8 years old. I went to the small shop on our housing estate. It was weekend during the summer so mummy allow me to go alone. I have done shopping and returned home.

Suddenly, the biggest car I ever saw stopped near to me. I remeber that it was big red Fiat. I felt a rush of adrenalin.

With a big scream I run away to home - my protection. In the end I hugged to my mum skirt and start crying.

Nowadays I realized that maybe men from this big Fiat would like to ask me about road.. It is funny to me, today, but then.... I think over - who was more terrified- me or this stranger who saw a little screaming girl...


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You know that my mother always give me notice that I can't talk to foreigner.(foreigner jeżeli chodzi Ci tu o obcokrajowców, a o obcych - strangers) Also she told me that if some car will stop close to me, men from this car will abduct me. Naturally I was young and I belived my mum totally.

This story happened when I was 8 years old. I went to the small shop on our housing estate. It was weekend during the summer so mummy allowed me to go alone. I have done shopping and returned home.

Suddenly, the biggest car I ever saw stopped near to me. I remeber that it was big red Fiat. I felt a rush of adrenalin.

I run away to home - my shelter (chyba;)) with a big scream . In the end I hugged to my mums skirt and started crying.

Nowadays I realize that maybe men from this big Fiat would like to ask me about road.. It is funny to me, today, but then.... I think over - who was more terrified- me or this stranger who saw a little screaming girl


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Have I ever told you about the time I was attacked by a stranger?
You know that my mother always 'give' GAVE me 'notice' (to zle slowo tutaj) that I SHOULD never 'can't' (niepotr) talk to foreignerS. Also she told me that if some car will 'stopped' STOP close to me THE men from this car will abduct me. Naturally I was young and I beliEveD my mum totally.
This story 'befall' (zle slowo) when I was 8 years old. I went to 'the' A small shop on our housing estate. It was weekend during the summer so mummy allowED me
to go alone. I 'have done' DID THE shopping and returned home.
I 'remeber' (ortog) that it was A big red Fiat.
>With a big scream I 'run' RAN away 'to' TOWARDS home - my 'protection' (lepiej SAFETY. In the end I hugged 'to' (niepotr) my mum'S skirt and startED crying.
Nowadays I 'realized' (nie, tutaj potrzeba zastanawiam sie) that maybe men from this big Fiat would like to ask me about THE road.. It is funny to me today, but then.... WHEN I think IT over - who was more terrified- me or this stranger who saw a 'little screaming'(zla kol slwo...screaming... girl...

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