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Dear Sir/Madame

I am writting to response to yours advertising in newspapers about language course. I am intereseted to take part in this course.

To begin with, I would like to know how many houets it will take per week and also does lessons take place in Saturdays?

Seconldy, Please, send to me additional informations about trips. For example, I want to know where exacly we go?

There is one more thing about I would like to ask. I want be sure that is possibility to take my friends with me fore those trips?

I am very gratefull for sepnding your time for me. I lok forward to recaiving your response in the near future.

Yours truly,
XYZ

Dear Sir/'Madame' MADAM
I am writting to response to 'yours' YOUR 'advertising' ADVERTISEMENT in newspapers about A language course. I am intereseted 'to' IN takING part 'in' oN this course.
To begin with, I would like to know how many 'houets' (ortog) it will take per
week and also 'does' DO THE lessons take place 'in' ON Saturdays?
'Seconldy' (ortog), please, send 'to' (niepotr) me additional 'informations' INFORMATION about ANY trips. For example, I want to know where 'exacly' (ortog) 'we go' (lepiej ...are the trips to?
There is one more thing 'about' (nie w tym miejscu) I would like to ask ABOUT. I want be sure that THERE is A possibility to take my friends with me 'fore' FOR (ale lepiej ON) 'those' THESE trips?
I am very 'gratefull' (ortog) for 'sepnding' (optog) your time 'for' ON me. I 'lok' (Ortog) forward to 'recaiving' (ortog) your response in the near future.