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Are you dreaming about beautifull, small and easy to use mobile phone ?
That dream is possible. Our new mobile phone Nokia Luna is for people who like comfort, elegance anf useful gadgets. Nokia Luna have camera, blueetooth and a lot of another functions. You must have it.
Only 255$
Product have a guarantee for two years. Nokia Luna are the best of mobile phones. You should buy this gadget, becouse it is a good choice. Don't miss this opportunity.
Are you dreaming about A 'beautifull' (ortog), small and easy to use mobile phone?
That dream is possible. (nie, bo tutaj chodzi o to, ze 'that dream can become reality') Our new mobile phone Nokia Luna is for people who like comfort, elegance anD useful gadgets. Nokia Luna 'have' (ale phone to jest 'it'- a 'it' to 3os.l.poj - tutaj czasownik HAS) A camera, blueetooth and a lot of 'another' OTHER functions. You must 'have' (moze lepiej 'possess') it.
THE product 'have' (dlaczegpo nie rozrozniasz 3os.l.poj?) a guarantee for two years.
You should buy this gadget, 'becouse' (prosze to slowo poprawic, i nigdy wiecej jego tak nie pisac) it is a good choice.
Are you dreaming about beautiful, small and easy mobile phone ?
Your dream could become a reality. Our new mobile phone Nokia Luna is designed for people who like comfort, elegance and useful gadgets. Nokia Luna is equipped with a camera, Bluetooth and many other features. You’ve got to have it!
Only 255$
The product has two year warranty. Nokia Luna is the best mobile phone on the market. You should buy this gadget because it is a good choice. Don't miss the opportunity!

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