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9. Knowing foreign languages is the most import ant sill you should possess to apply for a Job.
Nowadays, more and more people learn foreign languages. Everyone knows that knowing languages can be a great advantage, especially if we want to travel, study abroad, meet people from other countries and, of course, when we apply for a job. But does it the most important skill which must be possess to have a good job?
Firstly, I think that abilities, personality, knowledge and sometimes experience are very important, often more important than knowledge of foreign languages. However, some people maintain that if we know more languages, we can easier find a good job. I agree, but I consider that we must possess other skills. What is more, exist professions which do not require knowing languages (obviously if we work in Poland). I think that everyone should known English which is the most important language required to work in other countries.
Secondly, many people say that learning foreign languages is way leading to great opportunities: we will be able to understand the other notions and cultures better and it gives us new career opportunities. This sounds great, but not everyone has possibility to learn foreign languages. Languages courses are usually very expensive and many people cannot afford it. Now, English is obligatory at school, but at one time Russian was taught at school. What is more , now students can learn other languages at school for free: German, French, Latin, Spanish, etc. However, there are opinions that we can learn languages thanks to the Internet where we can find everything! It is true, but not everyone has access to the Internet and the time for learning.
To sum up, we live in modern and constantly developing world what require for us more and more, so we also should develop ourselves. Knowing foreign languages is an indispensable skill which in future everyone will possess.

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Knowing foreign languages is the most important sKill you should
possess to apply for a Job.
Everyone 'knows' (znajdz inne slowo tutaj - moze 'realizes') that knowing languages can be a great advantage...
But 'does' IS it the most important skill which WE must 'be' (niepotr) possess IN ORDER to have a good job?
...often more important than THE knowledge of foreign languages. However, some people maintain that if we know more languages, we can 'easier' (easily-albo daj 'easier' na koncu zdania) find a good job.
What is more, THERE exist professions which do not require 'knowing' THE KNOWLEDGE OF languages..
I think that everyone should knoW English which is the most important language required to work in other countries.
Secondly, many people say that learning foreign languages is 'A' way
leading to great opportunities: we will be able to understand 'the' (niepotr)
other nAtions and cultures better and it gives us new career
opportunities. This sounds great, but not everyone has THE possibility to
learn foreign languages. LanguagE courses are usually very expensive
and many people cannot afford 'it' (them- dlatego ze 'courses' to l. mnoga). What is more , now students can learn other languages at school for free: German, French, Latin, Spanish, 'etc' (nie pisz 'etc' bo to niestety nie jest jeden z jezykow obcych).
To sum up, we live in modern and constantly developing world 'what' THAT
requireS 'for us' (for us czy FROM us) more and more, so we 'also should' (zla kol slow- should also) develop ourselves.