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Now I would like to concentrete on things that I like, that make impress on me. Because world and people aren't so bad as it sometimes seems to be.
Firstly, I love gentelmans and decorum. It's really nice when a man give up his place to a woman in a bus or tram, when a man let a woman pass the door first...
When this kind of situation happens to me I smile and thank this man for his kindness, because gentelmen should feel that they behave appropriately.

I also like when somebody who I don't know smile to me on the strret, in the tram. We live in a tearing hurry and even stress. When I see somebody's smile, my mood improves and I have a power to learn and do my other duties.


Another thing I love is swinging on a swing. I like it because then I feel like a child, like a bird, so carefree.. It's hard to explain... But I swing when I only have an opportunity to do it: when it's stable and if I don't take up a swing some child.
Now I would like to concentrAte on things that I like, that IMPRESS ME.
Because world and people aren't so bad as it sometimes seems to be.
Firstly, I love DECOROUS gentelMEN. It's really nice when a man
giveS up his SEAT to a woman ON a bus or TRAIN, when a man letS a woman
pass THROUGH the door first...
When this kind of situation happens to me I smile and thank this man
for his kindness, because gentelmen should feel that they behave appropriately.
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>I also like when somebody who I don't know smileS AT me on the strEet,
OR ON the traIN. We live in a tearing hurry and even stress. When I see
somebody's smile, I'M IN BETTER MOOD I have a power to learn and do
>my other duties.
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>Another thing I love is swinging on a swing. I like it because then I
>feel like a child, like a bird, so carefree.. It's hard to explain...
>But I swing when I only have THE opportunity to do it: when it's stable
>and if I don't TAKE SOME OTHER CHILD'S SWING.

MOZE TAK BEDZIE LEPIEJ??:)) POZDRAWIAM!!
oczywiście, że tak będzie lepiej:):):) dziękuję ślicznie!
pedantic ale,
>>I also like when somebody whoM I don't know

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