prosba o sprawdzenie listu

Od niedawna zajmujesz się nowym hohhy. W liście do znajomego z zagranicy;
-podziękuj za ostatni list i poinformuj go o swoim nowym hobby.
-napisz, w jakich okolicznościach i kiedy zainteresowałeś się nim,
-podaj dwa powody, dla których warto zajmować się owym hobby,
-wyraź nadzieję, że odpisze na twój list i prześlij pozdrowienia dla rodziców znajomego.


Dear Sebastian,
How are you? thanks for your letter.It was a nice surprise to hear from you
again after so many months.I have a new hobby namely this is Dance.Two weeks ago
I was on a tournament dance and it appealed to me.Dance is important for our organism because it allows keeping fit and losing weight.Dance is huge wich has
the entertainment not only for the psyche but also prfils I want to encourage as many people as I can to help them to leading healthy lifestyles.You must try dancing.It is really interesing hobby.Anyway,I have to finish now.Looking forward to hearing from you.Best regards for you and your parents.

Take care


XYZ


Z góry dziekuje... :)

Thanks for your letter.
I have a new hobby namely 'this is' (niepotr) DancING. Two weeks ago
I 'was on' (cos nie tak, WENT TO) a tournament dance and it appealed to me.Dance is important for our organism because it allows US TO 'keeping' KEEP fit and 'losing' LOSE weight.
Dance is 'huge wHich has the entertainment' (tutaj sie zgubilam, nie rozumiem) not only for the psyche, but also 'prfils'? I want to encourage as many people as I can to help them to 'leading' LEAD healthy lifestyles.
It is really AN interesing hobby.

Nie umniejszajac wkladu poprzedniczki, pare niezaleznych uwag:


I have a new hobby namely ( po hobby lepiej dac kropke i zaczac nowe zdanie od Namely albo To be exact it is Dance) this is Dance.

I was (at)on a(the) tournament dance (dance tournament, albo dance competition) and it appealed to me (it made a big impression on me) .

Dance is important for our organism (body) because it allows keeping fit and losing weight (-it helps us to stay fit - it keeps us in shape - tez mozna) and to lose weight) .

: I want to encourage as many people as I can to (Smozna tu dodac - dance regularly)( kropka - skonczyc zdanie i zaczac nowe od -It will) help them to leading(lead) healthy lifestyles ( lifestyle -s tu niepotrzebne).

regards for you and your parents - regards to you ...

tu pare sugestii jak zakonczyc list:

Yours sincerely - for use in letters and emails, when you start the letter "Dear Mr X".

Yours faithfully - for use in letters and emails, when you start the letter "Dear sir".

Best wishes - for use in a greetings card; increasing used in letters and emails too.

Best regards - for use in a business email.

Kind regards - for use in a business email.

Cheers - for use in an email to a friend.

See you later - for use in an email to a close friend.

cheers! ;)